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Believe I Now

believe i now, as genesis doth say, that woman from man was taken one day. that a part of me was needed for god to fully create every part of you, my woman, my love, and my mate. because when we're apart not talking, hugging, or kissing incomplete and broken, i feel, like a part of me is missing. hard to believe, it is, that for years i could survive while missing that part of me that keeps me so alive. the missing piece, you are, to my mind, heart, and soul. now together at last, we are, i am complete and made whole.

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Date: 12/19/2015 11:34:00 PM
Hi Jay, :) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do. ~SKAT LOVE~"
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:30:00 PM
Jay, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/1/2015 3:39:00 PM
Hi Jay, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita
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Lloyd J Bonds
Date: 12/2/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thanks!

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