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Life is a struggle life is a pain money is needed to cover you from the rain from west to east i travel north to south i look too no one can safe me now only life with all its clue riddle me this, riddle me that life is a big riddle so riddle on that never count life out or you will suffer the only way up is life making you tougher pain, tears and struggle are all part of life's plan stand up like a solder and take it like man you can say this you can say that at the end of the day life will still win what do you say to that air is what we need to keep life going so never stop breathing but take it in slowly life is an ascent so keep it while you have it believe in your self and always say I MAKE IT HAPPEN! ! !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2012 12:40:00 AM
Congratulations John, I enjoy reading your poem, well written Ellie
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:33:00 PM
John ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA
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Date: 11/28/2012 6:25:00 PM
Thanks but am a little rusty cause i haven't been writing poems since high school,just recently i got back to it and i really enjoyed it. if any pointers you willing to share please do.
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