Believe

I don’t see you
Yet I believe and fear you the most
Your existing in my being 
Make me wish for impossible things!

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Shannon Deane

November 16, 2011 at 11:32 AM

Writing comes from somewhere deep...whether fueled by loss and pain or joy and happiness, no poems should go unwritten if bursting to be free...you are honest in your writing...be not afraid to be you when you write...luv shannon

Ashek Rahaman

November 23, 2010 at 8:39 AM

Carol thank you. I don't know how long i will be able to keep on writing being my writings are only about losing a certain person

Ashek Rahaman

November 23, 2010 at 8:35 AM

Dr Mehta I did not understood your comments?

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 22, 2010 at 12:57 PM

I would like you to give a once over to the form of Ode, ashek

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 22, 2010 at 10:37 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashek. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

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