Bejeweled

Bronze soil, softened and bare Beneath sky stacked pillows Beckons the touch of green-- Beleaguered steps, I breathe Brushstrokes of tender heat Before my eye finds bloom Bathed in ruby blossoms August 16, 2016

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/6/2016 7:17:00 AM

Sam, full of imagery! congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Sam Jameson
Date: 9/6/2016 9:01:00 AM

Thank you, Laura-- I'm glad you found a few moments of peace while reading it. Have a wonderful day :)

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2016 1:32:00 PM

Lovely descriptive lines, Sam! Congrats on a most worthy win. Regards // paul

Sam Jameson
Date: 8/23/2016 6:31:00 AM

Thank you, Paul--

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2016 4:40:00 AM

Sam, I am always partial to nature poems and would have ranked this beauty much higher. Congratulations on your win! : ) 7

Sam Jameson
Date: 8/23/2016 6:30:00 AM

Thank you, Connie-- nature offers such a deluge of artful sights..some too pretty to even capture in words :) Have a great day--

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2016 8:20:00 PM

Sam, congrats on your fine win with this beautifully descriptive write! Well done! Blessings!

Sam Jameson
Date: 8/23/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thank you, Kim-- I appreciate the wonderful feedback and placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/16/2016 9:47:00 PM

And we have a winner!! Why did I bother even entering! Oh well this is stunning! I am partial to your writes. Write on!

Sam Jameson
Date: 8/17/2016 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, John-- your support is a cool drink. Nice to hear that the words brought some joy.. Have a great day.