Beings, Not Known To Outsiders

finally, put it to Allitteration! that was the core to begin this piece anyway

studied more possibilities and changed description to "Narrative" i think it suits better, or? hope pure poem lovers wont be deluded next time;)

i know this is bit primitive like for poetry...smth like playing scales on piano...have learned 5 to 10 new words with it:) and same length lines, they came mostly accidentally, that was a surprise. anyway, don't see any story here...single brief idea

well, i described real meeting, that took place this January. but why is this a story? here even nothing happened:) i can give some percent of one and another & smth else - it is usually a mixture, isn't? changed to original 3 collumns view now, instead of 1, though full lines didn't fitted here in page. but then i found it also interesting, unusual. Thanx for comment, it made me to read poem vs story differences, i liked also to read your poems, poetical stories?