Being Young, Being Me

I'm crazy, I’m dilly 
and sometimes act silly
Love having fun
And being there for everyone 

“What you see is what u get”
Enough said…
I have a lot of love to give
And super glad I get to live
A life not perfect
But one I love perfectly
Being young, Being me

I have a heart that’s fragile and missing some parts
But it still remain MY loving heart
A heart still strong enough
To do the one thing that one call love

This is the most random poem I wrote
But hey! that comes with being a poet
Say what you want and speak from your heart
Even though it miss a few parts

My life’s not perfect, but it is enough
I’m happy, ‘cause I still get to love
Today I feel free
Being young, Being me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/14/2014 10:44:00 AM
Enjoy every day of being young. Before you know it, that time will be a memory. Very nice, I could never have written anything so good when I was your age. BG
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Date: 11/19/2014 3:35:00 AM
Aww thank you so much for your kind comment Barbara :) and for taking the time to read my work. Have a lovely day. Regards "B"
Date: 11/12/2014 10:31:00 AM
Congrats "B" on a wonderful win! I enjoyed reading!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/12/2014 2:30:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda. Big hugs "B" Have a blessed day.
Date: 11/12/2014 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations "B" on your fine win with this refreshing write.
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Date: 11/12/2014 5:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Maurice. Hope you are having a lovely day thus far. Keep Well my friend. Regards "B"
Date: 11/11/2014 12:21:00 PM
Love the youthful feel I get from this !! Congrats on your win !!
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BE Bailey
Date: 11/11/2014 12:40:00 PM
Thank you Debra. Your comment means alot :) God bless you. Hugs " B"
Date: 11/11/2014 10:13:00 AM
Just returning with a big congratulations for your well-deserved win! Pandita
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Date: 11/11/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thank you Pandita. Have a great day. Big hugs "B"
Date: 11/11/2014 6:37:00 AM
wisdom in your words BE Bailey your soul is ancient for all your tender years congrats on win hugs
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Date: 11/11/2014 7:24:00 AM
Aww. Thanks Shadow. I really appreciate your comment. Big Hugs "B"
Date: 11/11/2014 1:28:00 AM
Beautifully expressed B E many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/11/2014 2:47:00 AM
Thank you Jan :) Hope you are having a superb day thus far. Hugs "B"
Date: 11/11/2014 1:12:00 AM
Glad to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/11/2014 2:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Richard :) Have a lovely day "B"
Date: 11/4/2014 9:03:00 AM
How beautifully expressed! Youth is to be enjoyed! Once it's gone, it can't be recaptured. Thanks for sharing your absolutely delightful down-to-earth for real poetry! Excellent piece, "B"! Pandita
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Date: 11/4/2014 1:58:00 PM
*Big smile* Thank you so much Pandita. I appreciate the words of kindness and praise. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Big hugs "B"
Date: 11/4/2014 6:05:00 AM
Lovely thoughts, BE. Please DO enjoy your youth. So glad you feel that way. It goes by much too fast.
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BE Bailey
Date: 11/4/2014 6:42:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Cona. I agree, it goes by too fast :) Have a lovely day. "B
Date: 10/23/2014 10:32:00 AM
Love the fact that you were able to release words straight from your heart. I also admire the first line in your last stanza, My life's not perfect, but it is enough." I truly agree with that. Sometimes we forget our purpose here on Earth due to our "surroundings." Thanks for capturing the moment and bringing me back to my senses...Enjoyed...INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 10/24/2014 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so much again for your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it and I am glad I could inspire you with this piece. Have a lovely day and never stop being you. Warm Regards "B"
Date: 10/22/2014 7:09:00 AM
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTFUL my dear sweet "new" friend!!!!! WELCOME! Big loving hugs, Jack XXX
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Date: 10/22/2014 7:19:00 AM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome Jack :) This is why I love my new poetry fam. I love your poems too and I will definitely read more. Keep well and keep writing :) Hugs "B"
Date: 10/22/2014 2:03:00 AM
It takes a lot of heart to be a true poet, and you have that, no doubt about it! I really like your positive attitude. Keep up the wonderful work!.... Welcome to Poetry Soup! I look forward to reading more from you!
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Date: 10/22/2014 2:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Kelly. Your comment mean more than you think. I am fairly new at writing poetry, but it is comments like yours that inspire me to just keep doing it. Love Poetry Soup and all its members. Have a lovely day. Hugs "B"
Date: 10/21/2014 9:11:00 AM
great fun piece B, really tells you as you are as last two lines really sums you up, keep blessed & happy, Gordon
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Date: 10/21/2014 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Gordon. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Have a lovely day. "B"
Date: 10/21/2014 9:11:00 AM
If we have loving hearts at any age we will experience the best life has to offer. I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 10/22/2014 2:56:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I second your statement 100%. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I look forward to reading your work. Warm Regards "B"
Date: 10/21/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Liam.
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:29:00 AM
love the style you drew this beautiful pen
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Liam.
Date: 10/21/2014 5:06:00 AM
A very unique piece. Works for me. Me likes it.
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Date: 10/21/2014 5:18:00 AM
*Laughs* Me likes it too! Have a lovely day "B"
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