BE Bailey Poet Rhyme

Being Young, Being Me

I'm crazy, I’m dilly 
and sometimes act silly
Love having fun
And being there for everyone 

“What you see is what u get”
Enough said…
I have a lot of love to give
And super glad I get to live
A life not perfect
But one I love perfectly
Being young, Being me

I have a heart that’s fragile and missing some parts
But it still remain MY loving heart
A heart still strong enough
To do the one thing that one call love

This is the most random poem I wrote
But hey! that comes with being a poet
Say what you want and speak from your heart
Even though it miss a few parts

My life’s not perfect, but it is enough
I’m happy, ‘cause I still get to love
Today I feel free
Being young, Being me

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Barbara Gorelick November 14, 2014 at 10:44 AM Enjoy every day of being young. Before you know it, that time will be a memory. Very nice, I could never have written anything so good when I was your age. BG BE Bailey November 19, 2014 at 3:35 AM Aww thank you so much for your kind comment Barbara :) and for taking the time to read my work. Have a lovely day. Regards "B"

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 12, 2014 at 10:31 AM Congrats "B" on a wonderful win! I enjoyed reading!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda BE Bailey November 12, 2014 at 2:30 PM Thank you Rhonda. Big hugs "B" Have a blessed day.

Maurice Yvonne November 12, 2014 at 4:48 AM Congratulations "B" on your fine win with this refreshing write. BE Bailey November 12, 2014 at 5:10 AM Thank you so much Maurice. Hope you are having a lovely day thus far. Keep Well my friend. Regards "B"

Debra Squyres November 11, 2014 at 12:21 PM Love the youthful feel I get from this !! Congrats on your win !! BE Bailey November 11, 2014 at 12:40 PM Thank you Debra. Your comment means alot :) God bless you. Hugs " B"

Pandita Sietesantos November 11, 2014 at 10:13 AM Just returning with a big congratulations for your well-deserved win! Pandita BE Bailey November 11, 2014 at 11:20 AM Thank you Pandita. Have a great day. Big hugs "B"

Shadow Hamilton November 11, 2014 at 6:37 AM wisdom in your words BE Bailey your soul is ancient for all your tender years congrats on win hugs BE Bailey November 11, 2014 at 7:24 AM Aww. Thanks Shadow. I really appreciate your comment. Big Hugs "B"

Jan Allison November 11, 2014 at 1:28 AM Beautifully expressed B E many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx BE Bailey November 11, 2014 at 2:47 AM Thank you Jan :) Hope you are having a superb day thus far. Hugs "B"

Richard Lamoureux November 11, 2014 at 1:12 AM Glad to see this one on the winners list. Congratulations. BE Bailey November 11, 2014 at 2:46 AM Thank you so much Richard :) Have a lovely day "B"

Pandita Sietesantos November 4, 2014 at 9:03 AM How beautifully expressed! Youth is to be enjoyed! Once it's gone, it can't be recaptured. Thanks for sharing your absolutely delightful down-to-earth for real poetry! Excellent piece, "B"! Pandita BE Bailey November 4, 2014 at 1:58 PM *Big smile* Thank you so much Pandita. I appreciate the words of kindness and praise. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. Big hugs "B"

Cona Adams November 4, 2014 at 6:05 AM Lovely thoughts, BE. Please DO enjoy your youth. So glad you feel that way. It goes by much too fast. BE Bailey November 4, 2014 at 6:42 AM Thank you for your comment Cona. I agree, it goes by too fast :) Have a lovely day. "B

Pace Ink-U-Script October 23, 2014 at 10:32 AM Love the fact that you were able to release words straight from your heart. I also admire the first line in your last stanza, My life's not perfect, but it is enough." I truly agree with that. Sometimes we forget our purpose here on Earth due to our "surroundings." Thanks for capturing the moment and bringing me back to my senses...Enjoyed...INK-U-SCRIPT BE Bailey October 24, 2014 at 1:17 AM Thank you so much again for your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read my work. I appreciate it and I am glad I could inspire you with this piece. Have a lovely day and never stop being you. Warm Regards "B"

Jack Ellison October 22, 2014 at 7:09 AM THIS IS ABSOLUTELY DELIGHTFUL my dear sweet "new" friend!!!!! WELCOME! Big loving hugs, Jack XXX BE Bailey October 22, 2014 at 7:19 AM Thank you so much for the warm welcome Jack :) This is why I love my new poetry fam. I love your poems too and I will definitely read more. Keep well and keep writing :) Hugs "B"

Kelly Deschler October 22, 2014 at 2:03 AM It takes a lot of heart to be a true poet, and you have that, no doubt about it! I really like your positive attitude. Keep up the wonderful work!.... Welcome to Poetry Soup! I look forward to reading more from you! BE Bailey October 22, 2014 at 2:38 AM Thank you so much Kelly. Your comment mean more than you think. I am fairly new at writing poetry, but it is comments like yours that inspire me to just keep doing it. Love Poetry Soup and all its members. Have a lovely day. Hugs "B"

Gordon Mcconnell October 21, 2014 at 9:11 AM great fun piece B, really tells you as you are as last two lines really sums you up, keep blessed & happy, Gordon BE Bailey October 21, 2014 at 9:33 AM Thank you Gordon. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. Have a lovely day. "B"

Richard Lamoureux October 21, 2014 at 9:11 AM If we have loving hearts at any age we will experience the best life has to offer. I enjoyed this piece. BE Bailey October 22, 2014 at 2:56 AM Thank you Richard. I second your statement 100%. I am glad you enjoyed this piece. I look forward to reading your work. Warm Regards "B"

BE Bailey October 21, 2014 at 8:39 AM Thank you Liam.

Liam Mcdaid October 21, 2014 at 8:29 AM love the style you drew this beautiful pen BE Bailey October 21, 2014 at 8:39 AM Thank you Liam.

Maurice Yvonne October 21, 2014 at 5:06 AM A very unique piece. Works for me. Me likes it. BE Bailey October 21, 2014 at 5:18 AM *Laughs* Me likes it too! Have a lovely day "B"