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Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay, resting our bodies on some soft hay. After counting many cloud shapes, it's time to eat a bunch of grapes. Where did the day go, listen here the sound of the crow. Night is on it's way, guess we must not stay. The stars are starting to shine, will you be mine? Date Written: 3/29/2020 3 Place 4/13/2020 Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup Poet - Eve Roper Contest Judged: 4/13/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One First Line Used, "Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay - from the poem "Under the canopy of pine trees," written by Eve Roper"

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Date: 4/13/2020 11:07:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/14/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thank You, so very much. Have a great day. Hugs back and enjoy your day..........
Date: 4/13/2020 7:06:00 PM
lovely write Paula... congratulations on your win in the contest... hugs
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Date: 4/13/2020 9:50:00 PM
Glad you like it. Thanks for your note and congratulations. Hugs back and have a good week............
Date: 4/13/2020 4:30:00 PM
Being with nature is always a way to spur romantic vibes as you so well illustrate--congrats on your win, Paula.
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Date: 4/13/2020 9:49:00 PM
Thanks for your note and congratulations. Glad you like it. Have a good week........
Date: 4/13/2020 1:48:00 PM
- Wonderful poetic lines, Paula ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/13/2020 1:54:00 PM
Thank You so much. It made my day. Have a wonderful day and week....................
Date: 4/13/2020 7:37:00 AM
Lovely poem Paula.. Congrats on your placement in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/13/2020 1:37:00 PM
Great News. I did not know about my placement. Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.........
Date: 4/6/2020 9:21:00 AM
Hi Paula, Lovely. Frances
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/6/2020 5:46:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day.........
Date: 3/30/2020 1:22:00 PM
Lovely romantic tones spread throughout this piece Paula, nice rhyme and flow too. Hope you keep well, Blessings always,Gordon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2020 1:29:00 PM
Thank You, for reading, writing and kind words. Glad you like it. Be safe with blessings........
Date: 3/29/2020 6:23:00 PM
Hello Palua, this poem is romantic to me. Enjoy your evening my friend. Stay well, be strong, be safe. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/30/2020 12:07:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Yes, love is in the air. Be well, strong, safe and enjoy your day...................