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Being Mortal

Goodnight sun and thank you for the day -will I see you tomorrow?







© Demetrios Trifiatis
    06 February 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2016 7:29:00 PM

so cute, Demetrios. We have a monoku poet treasure in you. (I really wish you would enter the one-liner contests like what PD keeps having!!)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 3:31:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea for your fine comment and suggestion BUT I enter no contests, not because I am against them, but it would take me a lot of time! I just send my messages, hoping I am doing no harm.

Kim Difford

Date: 2/6/2016 5:01:00 PM

Demetrios I love this - very!, loving!, gracious! and profound!. Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 3:33:00 AM

Thank you so very much, dear Kim, for visiting and commenting in such an enthusiastic way!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/6/2016 2:46:00 PM

If God's wishes continues, surely next sun will be seen. Beautiful Monoku, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/7/2016 3:55:00 AM

My friend, BL, I do not know if I be there to see the sun rising! Yes, all things are in God's hands! Thank you so much!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/6/2016 6:59:00 AM

Yep, love it. Succinct.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:15:00 AM

Happy you do my friend, Scott! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2016 6:28:00 AM

- A new and beautiful day waiting for you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/6/2016 7:17:00 AM

Only the ONE can make such a declaration, dear Anne-Lise... but since you are second in ...line I gladly accept it! Haha! Thank you dear friend, for all your visits and comments!