Being Fortunate

Who is the richer for being?
The one who is beautiful, being observed-
Or the one who is observing the beauty?
©dbyrne feb 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Marcum Wong Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 7:54 PM
That would depend upon the actions of both! I do understand what you are relating though, David.
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February 9, 2014 at 6:47 PM
Very deep David...I like it....Tim
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