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Being a Light To Others

In a way, I go along the path it shows, Climbing in the highs, crawling into the lows, The game is all set to go straight ahead, Many tend to move as how they were told And there this shine from the deep rising hole As one fall in, it gave the ray of hope to go further in the play Nothing matters to them in that moment, Just staring at the brightness, by means to glow along True! As I fall in, there is this face, too familiar, There is this light, as the halo glows all around her head.

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Date: 3/21/2022 3:34:00 AM
" there this shine from the deep rising hole" - Great. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Subasree Gunasekaran
Date: 3/21/2022 4:59:00 AM
Thanks for commenting!
Date: 3/20/2022 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :)
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Subasree Gunasekaran
Date: 3/21/2022 5:01:00 AM
Thank you too for giving me a good opportunity!!

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