Subasree Gunasekaran Poet Free verse

Being a Light To Others

In a way, I go along the path it shows, 
Climbing in the highs, crawling into the lows, 
The game is all set to go straight ahead, 
Many tend to move as how they were told
And there this shine from the deep rising hole 
As one fall in, it gave the ray of hope to go further in the play 
Nothing matters to them in that moment, 
Just staring at the brightness, by means to glow along 
True! As I fall in, there is this face, too familiar, 
There is this light, as the halo glows all around her head.

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Beata Agustin August 14, 2024 at 5:55 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Christuraj Alex March 21, 2022 at 3:34 AM " there this shine from the deep rising hole" - Great. Beautiful writing. Congratulations! Subasree Gunasekaran March 21, 2022 at 4:59 AM Thanks for commenting!

Anoucheka Gangabissoon March 20, 2022 at 9:43 AM Congratulations for the placement and thanks for the entry :) Subasree Gunasekaran March 21, 2022 at 5:01 AM Thank you too for giving me a good opportunity!!