Beholden

She never stopped talking, but now silence is golden She ran off with the lodger, to him I'm beholden. Entry for Hit me with an Epi-Pen Poetry Contest Sponsored by Maureen McGreavy. 30/11/2019. Placed7th.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/13/2019 1:12:00 PM

LOL! Congratulations, Gary!

Gary Smith
Date: 12/13/2019 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Kim. :)

Jean Murray

Date: 12/11/2019 4:17:00 PM

Always look on the bright side? Lovely.

Gary Smith
Date: 12/11/2019 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Jean. :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/11/2019 4:02:00 AM

Gary congrats on your win!;)

Gary Smith
Date: 12/11/2019 5:27:00 AM

Thank you Brenda. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/10/2019 11:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Gary. Well done.

Gary Smith
Date: 12/11/2019 5:27:00 AM

Thank you Line. :)

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 9:23:00 PM

Congrats on your winning poem Gary

Gary Smith
Date: 12/11/2019 5:27:00 AM

Thank you Gregory. :)

Na Na

Date: 11/30/2019 7:31:00 PM

Hi Gary well weaved. Thanks for sharing this and best of luck in the contest

Gary Smith
Date: 12/1/2019 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Gregory. :)