Behold the Rapture

Forsakenly barren,
the world burns around me,
pyretic tears freefall from sore eyes,
turning to dust on cold shoulders,
hysterical lament in screams, I can't bear...
Perpetual darkness reaping cruel devastation,
grey skies cover the earth in ash, 
forever consuming, it never sleeps,
time abandons the traditional hourglass.
In resonance, the rocks call out their creator,
mountains crumble as if made of sand,
heaven has fallen and with it came light,
and, behold.... the promise land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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July 9, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Serenity Johnson, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Love ~SKAT~
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October 8, 2011 at 11:22 PM
This was a very interesting poem Serenity and I really liked it..... It sort of pissed me off, reading the first sentence of Carol's comment really ruined the vibe for me. But great poem nonetheless. Take care.
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April 13, 2011 at 6:37 AM
What a beautiful sunny day here at my house. I am so happy to be able to read your excellent poetry this morning Serenity. I hope you will enjoy your day and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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October 8, 2011 at 11:20 PM
do you even read the poems you comment on?
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