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Behind Those Eyes

Captivating is your gaze.

What's behind those eyes?

Love or lies?




*A quinzain for PD's 10-minute contest

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Kash Poet

November 16, 2012 at 5:38 AM

No lies~~only LOVE~~~jkd:) Love it!!

Andrew Crisci

November 11, 2011 at 10:16 AM

Congratulations on your first place, Carolyn in Dr. Ram contest, "Quinzaine " It's a romantic poem magnificently expressed. Thanks for your kind comments. I am doing great. Are you hanging in there? Enjoy the Holiday. Love, Andrew.

John Freeman

November 9, 2011 at 6:06 PM

Nice verse Carolyn capturing the first place. Congratulations on a worthy presentation. Shining bright. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

November 9, 2011 at 6:48 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your big win.Good questions asked.

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 9, 2011 at 6:07 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Quinzaine Again"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

November 9, 2011 at 4:54 AM

Love it Carolyn, congratulations on your first place win :) love Wilma

Joyce Johnson

November 8, 2011 at 11:12 PM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn. You have the quinzaine down perfectly. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2011 at 9:59 PM

VERY nice, And congratulations, Carolyn.

Gwendolen Song

November 8, 2011 at 6:48 PM

Truly dynamic...ya never know do u? We have to keep trustin our hearts.....Congrats dear Carolyn! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 8, 2011 at 6:13 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

November 2, 2011 at 5:39 PM

Oh, this is a good one....a hard one to beat!! Good luck, Carolyn, excellent!

Jack Horne

November 2, 2011 at 2:23 PM

Ah, and who can ever tell? I'll be like Accora and make a prediction: first place win for this one

Black Eyed Susan

October 26, 2011 at 9:50 AM

hmmm...i bet i would run 1st and hope to survive a back attack rather than having my face ripped to pieces. of course if I had a gun, that changes everything...good luck in the contest :)

Russell Sivey

October 25, 2011 at 9:17 PM

Just so you know, I would be running first and foremost right out range of any meeting! Great poem Carolyn! Awesome job!!

Dan Kearley

October 25, 2011 at 3:25 PM

I love it! :-)

Gwendolen Song

October 25, 2011 at 9:16 AM

Ahhhhhh,.....reminds me of Dances with Wolves...their eyes become one and locked in a gaze....so awesome, Carolyn. Dr. Mehta will be enthralled! Gwendolen

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