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Behind Those Eyes

Captivating is your gaze. What's behind those eyes? Love or lies? *A quinzain for PD's 10-minute contest

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Kash Poet

Date: 11/16/2012 5:38:00 AM

No lies~~only LOVE~~~jkd:) Love it!!

Andrew Crisci

Date: 11/11/2011 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your first place, Carolyn in Dr. Ram contest, "Quinzaine " It's a romantic poem magnificently expressed. Thanks for your kind comments. I am doing great. Are you hanging in there? Enjoy the Holiday. Love, Andrew.

John Freeman

Date: 11/9/2011 6:06:00 PM

Nice verse Carolyn capturing the first place. Congratulations on a worthy presentation. Shining bright. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 11/9/2011 6:48:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your big win.Good questions asked.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2011 6:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Quinzaine Again"contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/9/2011 4:54:00 AM

Love it Carolyn, congratulations on your first place win :) love Wilma

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/8/2011 11:12:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn. You have the quinzaine down perfectly. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2011 9:59:00 PM

VERY nice, And congratulations, Carolyn.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/8/2011 6:48:00 PM

Truly dynamic...ya never know do u? We have to keep trustin our hearts.....Congrats dear Carolyn! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2011 6:13:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/2/2011 5:39:00 PM

Oh, this is a good one....a hard one to beat!! Good luck, Carolyn, excellent!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/2/2011 2:23:00 PM

Ah, and who can ever tell? I'll be like Accora and make a prediction: first place win for this one

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/26/2011 9:50:00 AM

hmmm...i bet i would run 1st and hope to survive a back attack rather than having my face ripped to pieces. of course if I had a gun, that changes everything...good luck in the contest :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/25/2011 9:17:00 PM

Just so you know, I would be running first and foremost right out range of any meeting! Great poem Carolyn! Awesome job!!

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/25/2011 3:25:00 PM

I love it! :-)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/25/2011 9:16:00 AM

Ahhhhhh,.....reminds me of Dances with Wolves...their eyes become one and locked in a gaze....so awesome, Carolyn. Dr. Mehta will be enthralled! Gwendolen