Behind the Mind

Opening pages of mystic tales.
Of how the past and present prevails.
Between the lines of empty spaces. 
The truth is shown in new born faces.

A dawning vision toward wayward sky's.
A thought balloon takes off and flies.
Begins it's journey to everywhere.
A passion palace up in the air.

Harmonious in every way.
A dream beyond an endless day.
An after thought of future's passed.
Slowly developing so fast.

An intertwining's interlude.
A mind that had become unglued.
Existence in a world beyond.
A dawning that just never dawned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
December 21, 2014 at 9:26 PM
Your thought flow like a lazy river.. Very nice, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Anderson Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:53 PM
I love the fact hat your words pull you in. great write.
Anderson Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 10:53 PM
I mean that. Take care.
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Hello , my friend. Enjoyed your rhyming comments again!!! have a wonderful night.
Squyres Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 9:27 AM
One of your best of many bests!! A dream beyond an endless day... Wow!! Then that final verse.... bravo !! Enjoyed your minds journey that leads to everywhere !! Imagining passions palace in an intertwining interlude ... ahhhhh
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:42 PM
love this, especially the last line.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
a very reflective one from you. The last line was pretty cool: a dawning that just never dawned. I love seeing unique thoughts like that.
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