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Behind the Mind

Opening pages of mystic tales. Of how the past and present prevails. Between the lines of empty spaces. The truth is shown in new born faces. A dawning vision toward wayward sky's. A thought balloon takes off and flies. Begins it's journey to everywhere. A passion palace up in the air. Harmonious in every way. A dream beyond an endless day. An after thought of future's passed. Slowly developing so fast. An intertwining's interlude. A mind that had become unglued. Existence in a world beyond. A dawning that just never dawned.

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Date: 12/21/2014 9:26:00 PM
Your thought flow like a lazy river.. Very nice, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 11/22/2014 10:53:00 PM
I love the fact hat your words pull you in. great write.
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Meg Anderson
Date: 11/22/2014 10:53:00 PM
I mean that. Take care.
Date: 11/12/2014 3:44:00 PM
Hello , my friend. Enjoyed your rhyming comments again!!! have a wonderful night.
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Date: 11/10/2014 9:27:00 AM
One of your best of many bests!! A dream beyond an endless day... Wow!! Then that final verse.... bravo !! Enjoyed your minds journey that leads to everywhere !! Imagining passions palace in an intertwining interlude ... ahhhhh
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Date: 11/9/2014 2:42:00 PM
love this, especially the last line.
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Date: 11/9/2014 12:00:00 AM
a very reflective one from you. The last line was pretty cool: a dawning that just never dawned. I love seeing unique thoughts like that.
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