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Behind Back There

"Behind Back There" I guess you were the one for me To comfort & care I guess it was a mistake To leave you behind back there And things came together And things fell apart Didn't matter what kind of day You remained in my heart And they may take away The meaning of it all But while they use a shot Our glass is much more tall And they may leave it be Pretend to walk away All I see is whats said in your face I cant hear a single word they say And I guess you were the one for me To comfort & to care I know it was a huge mistake To leave you behind back there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/10/2016 5:02:00 PM
I love the way your verses create a shape of the Bonsai tree!! Congrats Adreaa, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/7/2016 6:12:00 PM
I thought this poem was extremely different. Please keep up the good work. From Shaniki Smith
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:49:00 AM
Adrea, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:43:00 AM
Adrea, what a perfect first post! Welcome to PS, you will love it here..Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem and I look forward to reading many more. Stay blessed :)-luloo
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Date: 4/24/2016 8:03:00 AM
Adrea, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:06:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Adrea. :)
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