Behind a Rose

Everyone hunts me, wild and greedy. Although growing in low surface and full of muddy Displays me in mini bottle, limits athmosphere Only for relishing a beauty, called human Sweet and beauty, does not it? Hope my thorns long For protecting my self deeply No touch for loving someone Just a sense come to heart Throw away when i hurt you!

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Carol Louise Moon

Date: 10/23/2020 4:31:00 PM

This is a fine, thought-provoking poem.

Ghassani Auliannisa Widjajati
Date: 11/23/2020 4:53:00 AM

Many thanks Carol :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/18/2020 10:06:00 PM

Throw away when i hurt you!/// it's lovely expression; love is thick where hurt is in loving forgiveness !

Ghassani Auliannisa Widjajati
Date: 10/19/2020 5:30:00 AM

Oh thank you.. You have a point there! This poem just a voice of my heart when the love is irrational, too much people choose to stay with their partner even though they hurt each other.