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Behind a Brothers Bond

Behind A Brothers Bond Always there amidst your decussate despair, behind the wall of sleep A heart to share with your ensuant err, comforting your wall of weep A simple soul to make you healthy whole, a brother in my heart I keep In their goal with a rationed role, they are the guardians of their sheep With a brothers bond there’s a quick respond, a strength we may reap Never conned with a giving spawned, a brother’s love in a divers deep. The Hollies - 'He Ain't Heavy He's My Brother' June.18.2018 When line SIX is a perfect FIX. Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 6/25/2018 6:43:00 PM
Many congrats on your well deserved win, it is indeed a beauty
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Date: 6/23/2018 9:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win, ^WW^, love this beautiful heartwarming verse :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/22/2018 12:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent win with this beautiful poem making the fullest use of the six line limit expressing deep emotions decorated with lovely alliteration ... a great poem, W W ...
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Date: 6/20/2018 8:54:00 PM
Returning with well deserved congratulations Winged Warrior for your excellent win with your beautifully moving and deep poem of brotherly love.. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:17:00 PM
I feel your words, congratulations WW. Mick4nr
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Date: 6/20/2018 7:08:00 PM
- A beautiful poem on 6 lines, W.W. :) - It must have been difficult to judge, I think everyone is amazing, with different themes - Congratulations on a well deserved 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise: )
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Date: 6/20/2018 3:24:00 PM
I love that song and this is a beautiful poem about a strong brotherly bond.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 6/19/2018 5:59:00 PM
Precious meaning in this six line gem!
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Date: 6/19/2018 3:13:00 PM
Very touching lines! Genuine and wonderful words wrapping up refined and generous feelings! All the lines are exquisitely perfect fix! A FAV. Thank you for sharing Winged Warrior. Stay safe and blessed.
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Date: 6/19/2018 12:50:00 PM
WW, you made my heart shiver with delight... charming language on kinship... huggs
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Date: 6/19/2018 2:43:00 AM
Very well said WW
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Date: 6/18/2018 8:02:00 PM
A heartfelt rendering--sweet brotherly love..beautiful rhymes..a winning poem, WW.
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Date: 6/18/2018 7:52:00 PM
A beautifully moving poetic presentation my wonderful poetic brother.. Your masterfully executed poem and the song by The Hollies (which I've always loved) brought me to sweet and heartfelt tears. Your poetic lines are exquisite with tender emotion, Winged Warrior. Thank you for a beautiful emotional experience.. ~Susan
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