Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Begotten

Traveled long
 I come afar
Guided by a star 

Hear echoes of voice within

I am aching 
from blues and bruise
Yet, I languish to cruise
Nothing to lose
This I choose

Afire you came
Bold brave but tame
You spun great change
Breaking me from woos
Melting winter, heralding spring
An oasis to my arid life

To each ounce of hunger
You're there my brave hunter
Basking into leaflets of wild
Invincible... Fearless...
Yet, love innocence mild
Like a growing child

Unto you I curled
No shrives I dive
Top of the world,
I wholly whorled
Visions revived
Missions survived

You and me, Me and you
Perfect Combination
Aren't we?
Weeps forgotten
Cries of joy aglow
Begotten bestow 

(c) Olive Eloisa
1:26pm
June 09, 2014

Contest Name	a poem you have not entered in a contest # 7 
Sponsor	Poet Destroyer A 
placed 2nd... :)

Inspired by the poem of Tim Smith: "Cravings".... :D Thanks Tim.. hugs.. :D

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James Fraser December 1, 2014 at 3:13 PM Beautiful poetry Olive dedicated to someone deep in your heart, James...... Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 2, 2014 at 3:35 AM this is simply a product of a poem I have read.. :)thankd James.

Kelly Deschler June 27, 2014 at 12:21 PM This is an amazing and uplifting poem, Olive Eloisa! You are so wonderful with the rhymes, and the word flow is so smooth. Congratulations on a well deserved win! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 9, 2014 at 4:24 PM thank you so much Kelly.. :) I really appreciate this.. :) God bless you. sorry for this late reply.. :(

Casarah Nance June 26, 2014 at 8:08 AM Awesome, Grats on your win girl!! ;) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 11:06 AM Thank you Casarah..:)hugs..:)

Debbie Guzzi June 25, 2014 at 7:44 PM Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 26, 2014 at 4:10 AM thank you Debbie.. :)

Tim Smith June 25, 2014 at 9:03 AM How cool you chose this one...congrats...hugs and more hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 25, 2014 at 4:00 PM hahaha tim :) thanks much for your kind inspiration... :D

Paul Callus June 25, 2014 at 3:25 AM This confirms what was said before!! Congratulations :)) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 25, 2014 at 6:14 AM THank you Paul.. :D as always I have not notice that as I always tell you that I am still learning and learning.. :D and i find joy doing it.. :D!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 25, 2014 at 1:30 AM Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,

Litan Dey June 24, 2014 at 9:53 PM Congratulations Dear Olive!!

Poet Destroyer A June 24, 2014 at 8:32 PM Olive, .. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 9, 2014 at 4:23 PM thanks so much dear LOlli Linda.. :) missing you .. :) hugs mumuchh..

Paul Callus June 10, 2014 at 9:27 AM Hi Olive_eloi! Recently you have managed to raise your poetry bar to a significant extent, both in content and technicality. Keep it up:) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 1:47 PM ohwowowowow!!!! That's one great remark Paul.. :O however I did not notice that much as I am always just trying to write and write and learn and take some advice :D thank you very much.. :) God bless you tea for a treat.. :D

Jiril Clemons June 9, 2014 at 3:40 PM Wow, Beautiful, metaphoric piece, Olive. Deeply expressed is that feeling of that inspiration person. Amazing imagery to go along with such pure honesty. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 1:43 PM Thank you Jiril :) Yes I read some of yours and truly they are a wow.. :) thanks for your generous comment.. :) this inspires me to write more.. :)

Casarah Nance June 9, 2014 at 10:01 AM oh very very cool Olive :) You are awesome :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 1:36 PM Casarah your comments is as sweet as your smile in your display pic.. :) Thank you so much.. :)

Tim Smith June 9, 2014 at 7:57 AM Oh how wonderful... Thanks sweetie. You put a big smile upon my face....hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 1:32 PM No problem Tim you put a big smile too when I read your poem.. :D and I was inspired so this is it.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta June 9, 2014 at 5:33 AM Lovely expressions on the feelings of love, Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 10, 2014 at 1:29 PM Thank you Dr. Ram for the lovely comment.. :) GBU