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Traveled long I come afar Guided by a star Hear echoes of voice within I am aching from blues and bruise Yet, I languish to cruise Nothing to lose This I choose Afire you came Bold brave but tame You spun great change Breaking me from woos Melting winter, heralding spring An oasis to my arid life To each ounce of hunger You're there my brave hunter Basking into leaflets of wild Invincible... Fearless... Yet, love innocence mild Like a growing child Unto you I curled No shrives I dive Top of the world, I wholly whorled Visions revived Missions survived You and me, Me and you Perfect Combination Aren't we? Weeps forgotten Cries of joy aglow Begotten bestow (c) Olive Eloisa 1:26pm June 09, 2014 Contest Name a poem you have not entered in a contest # 7 Sponsor Poet Destroyer A placed 2nd... :) Inspired by the poem of Tim Smith: "Cravings".... :D Thanks Tim.. hugs.. :D

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James Fraser

Date: 12/1/2014 3:13:00 PM

Beautiful poetry Olive dedicated to someone deep in your heart, James......

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/2/2014 3:35:00 AM

this is simply a product of a poem I have read.. :)thankd James.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/27/2014 12:21:00 PM

This is an amazing and uplifting poem, Olive Eloisa! You are so wonderful with the rhymes, and the word flow is so smooth. Congratulations on a well deserved win! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/9/2014 4:24:00 PM

thank you so much Kelly.. :) I really appreciate this.. :) God bless you. sorry for this late reply.. :(

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/26/2014 8:08:00 AM

Awesome, Grats on your win girl!! ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Casarah..:)hugs..:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/25/2014 7:44:00 PM

Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 4:10:00 AM

thank you Debbie.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/25/2014 9:03:00 AM

How cool you chose this one...congrats...hugs and more hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/25/2014 4:00:00 PM

hahaha tim :) thanks much for your kind inspiration... :D

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2014 3:25:00 AM

This confirms what was said before!! Congratulations :)) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/25/2014 6:14:00 AM

THank you Paul.. :D as always I have not notice that as I always tell you that I am still learning and learning.. :D and i find joy doing it.. :D!!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2014 1:30:00 AM

Read and enjoyed the poem. Congrats on the win,

Litan Dey

Date: 6/24/2014 9:53:00 PM

Congratulations Dear Olive!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2014 8:32:00 PM

Olive, .. Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting one of my many contests. I enjoyed every entry! If you like, stop by my latest blog "Never Say Never or my newest poem, THE NEW POET." It's a sweet dedication to every old and new poet. I've come in contact here on this site. Always & Forever ~LINDA

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/9/2014 4:23:00 PM

thanks so much dear LOlli Linda.. :) missing you .. :) hugs mumuchh..

Paul Callus

Date: 6/10/2014 9:27:00 AM

Hi Olive_eloi! Recently you have managed to raise your poetry bar to a significant extent, both in content and technicality. Keep it up:) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 1:47:00 PM

ohwowowowow!!!! That's one great remark Paul.. :O however I did not notice that much as I am always just trying to write and write and learn and take some advice :D thank you very much.. :) God bless you tea for a treat.. :D

Jiril Clemons

Date: 6/9/2014 3:40:00 PM

Wow, Beautiful, metaphoric piece, Olive. Deeply expressed is that feeling of that inspiration person. Amazing imagery to go along with such pure honesty. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Jiril :) Yes I read some of yours and truly they are a wow.. :) thanks for your generous comment.. :) this inspires me to write more.. :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/9/2014 10:01:00 AM

oh very very cool Olive :) You are awesome :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 1:36:00 PM

Casarah your comments is as sweet as your smile in your display pic.. :) Thank you so much.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/9/2014 7:57:00 AM

Oh how wonderful... Thanks sweetie. You put a big smile upon my face....hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 1:32:00 PM

No problem Tim you put a big smile too when I read your poem.. :D and I was inspired so this is it.. :D

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/9/2014 5:33:00 AM

Lovely expressions on the feelings of love, Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 6/10/2014 1:29:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Ram for the lovely comment.. :) GBU