Debra Mundine Poet Etheree

Begone From Me

A
thorn you
are in my
side; contempt for
you I must struggle
to hide; my confidence
in you will not abide; you
confer with my foes like the in
and outgoing tide; though, I wish you
well as long as your distance becomes wide.

             (P.S.--just in case 10 lines or under was intended, if not disregard the poem P.D.)

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Charmaine Chircop July 22, 2014 at 2:43 PM This is originally crafted and says so much.Ouch that thorn how it hurts and so wise to.keep it distant-Excellent thoughts penned.Tnks for reading my humble verse.

Skat A June 20, 2014 at 6:02 PM Debra, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Casarah Nance June 20, 2014 at 7:02 AM Well Done :) Pluck that thorn from your side and let the puncture heal. grats on your rank in the contest, what a fun theme :)

Pandita Sietesantos June 19, 2014 at 8:26 AM Congratulations, Debra, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 19, 2014 at 6:50 AM Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Debra

Poet Destroyer A June 19, 2014 at 1:09 AM Hello Debra, love it.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA