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She took his breathe away. A face so exquisite no artist would dare to paint, no seasoned poet could describe, for written words were non-existent. He was transfixed by her beauty. She truly had him believing in love at first sight and meeting her had changed everything. She made the sky bluer, the stars brighter, the flowers more fragrant. He wished her to be in his arms constantly. Stroking her tender cheek, he inhaled the heavenly scent of her hair. He couldn't remember the days before her and he didn't care. He would often awake to watch her sleep, her eyelids fluttering like butterfly wings, in a slumber land of dreams. He caught himself smiling at the mere thought of this delicate soul, contemplating all the wonderful journeys’ her would share with her. This infinite joy that had burst into his world and she was only nine days old.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2012 8:10:00 AM
wow. congrats on your win...~ sashi
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Date: 2/25/2012 6:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Liz. Love, Carol"
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:29:00 PM
congrats Liz on a wonderful write and win luv..
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Date: 2/24/2012 8:28:00 PM
LIZ~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Date: 2/23/2012 2:36:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:34:00 PM
I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Liz. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2012 9:47:00 AM
Sweet and lovely....cut baby...- oxox love Anne-Lise
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