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Begging Lips

Oh dearest most beautiful divine darling Like an angel uplifting love the ground begins crumbling underneath these feet floating I am to you In every warm breath kissing sweet sun setting delight you're always making me smile Even in the darkest night you're my fire fly blazing hot a dream When I am a fallen angel your love reaches down and picks me up Straight from out of the darkness that enveloped my being Whom rouses the spirit high empowering the mind Deeply dancing around this soul joyous music now sings smiling pure milky white would love honey just to kiss you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/5/2014 7:35:00 PM
Another fabulous pen my friend...cheers
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/6/2014 9:31:00 AM
thank you tim dear pal wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/5/2014 1:36:00 PM
So very beautiful! What more can I say now Liam. A 7 from me to you .Your pen is gold! Blessings, my dear friend. Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 2:09:00 PM
your so sweet dorian heartfelt wonderful comment bless you dear friend
Date: 11/5/2014 10:44:00 AM
I feel an angel is flying over my head "Even in the darkest night you're my fire fly blazing hot a dream" My favourite lines. Love pal....rajat
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 1:18:00 PM
jajat dear friend truly wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/5/2014 8:42:00 AM
such a smooth joyfull passionate poem...I LOVE IT! and your style is amasing!! i see you too are are a falling angel ^^ looking forward to hear more from you
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 9:00:00 AM
wonderful comment heartfelt beautiful thank you kindly smiling a pleasure bless you
Date: 11/5/2014 8:02:00 AM
Liam, Another most joyous write here my Mate!! Leprechauns Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 8:58:00 AM
thank you deeply gary for the truly wonderful comment always a pleasure to see you pal smiling leprechauns
Date: 11/5/2014 8:00:00 AM
Your words drip with your sweetness my friend, such a pleasure to read, :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 8:53:00 AM
ahh casarah thank you so kindly dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you so sweet
Date: 11/5/2014 7:52:00 AM
This is as sweet as honey Liam.Such a romantic poem -CT
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/5/2014 7:54:00 AM
thank you dear friend for the heart touching beautiful comment bless you

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