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Befuddled With Liquor

befuddled with liquor hearing noises in the distance unclear fuzzy thinking faculties blown lah-lah-land feeling outer space beyond comprehension inhibitions gone someone maneuvers your body you do not care fences gone whatever happens happens a dangerous place

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Rhona Mcferran

Date: 8/7/2019 2:20:00 PM

Perfectly described... and disturbing in just the right way! A timely poem, well done!! *clapping*

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/7/2019 8:59:00 PM

Thank you so much! I am always doing the STAR word STAR on this site too! Glad there are two of us doing it!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/6/2019 1:28:00 PM

A good warning, it’s been a long time since I’ve been this drunk. Fortunately I was not dressed provocatively at the time. ;0) The women I was hanging out with didn’t take advantage of my diminished state.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/6/2019 8:06:00 PM

You were one of the lucky ones, Richard, and I am glad for you. Many were not as lucky.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/6/2019 8:46:00 AM

That final line’s precarious! So true and haunting.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/6/2019 11:44:00 AM

I am warning people who will never read this, as they are too young to get on this site. Ha!

Ann Foster

Date: 8/6/2019 12:39:00 AM

Oh my, I believe I have been to that place, and never wish to return. Excellent feel to everything, which made me slightly woozy. Wonderfully so. Great write. Ann

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/6/2019 4:53:00 AM

I have been there too obviously....

M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/5/2019 8:09:00 PM

From what I recall of my younger years...yep...that's about it.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/6/2019 4:53:00 AM

It is more dangerous now apparently.

Eric Ashford

Date: 8/5/2019 6:29:00 PM

Very cool write Caren! Been there done that (many times). Slainte!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/6/2019 4:53:00 AM

I knew some could relate probably. I was surprised how many are so honest about it. One tiny sip and I am under a table asleep.