Befuddled

Seems recently I'm a bit out of control My mind is befuddled, gone out for a stroll Sign says “stay merry” Back momentarily Watering the daisies in my flowered petticoat

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David Smith

Date: 4/23/2019 2:47:00 PM

I can get my head around this one. Must also befuddled. Though can still recognise good poetry when I see it. Hope your Easter went well and you didn't get it mixed up with St Patrick's Day and give out green eggs. Regards David in NZ

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/23/2019 4:24:00 PM

Great fun my NZ pal!!! LOL Sadly, I get confused about all the holidays but I'm 83... I have steak for breckkie and Shreddies for supper!!! Worry not, I'll be okay my friend! Cheers, Happy Jack!!!!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/23/2019 1:09:00 PM

A sight I'd love to see . Good day Jack.

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/23/2019 4:19:00 PM

No pictures please!!! LOL

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 4/23/2019 7:47:00 AM

Darling image ;) Good morning my sweet Jack! Hugs n' Love, xomo! <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/23/2019 8:20:00 AM

Such a sweetie in my flowered petticoat eh! How are you this morning my love, think about you lots! A day without Mo is like a day without sunshine!!! Lots of that lovey stuff, Happy Jack XOX