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Before Wonka

septic nightfall scroll, languishing bed... indecent snores of kin ...restless 2/3/2020
Before Charlie unwrapped the golden ticket, all 4 grandparents rested in a slow death bed. Willie Wonka of Chocolate Factory fame saved their life (Author Roald Dahl)

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Date: 2/4/2020 3:41:00 AM
Witty dearest, Kim! Good luck! ...I am not a sceptic...!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2020 6:55:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Demetrios! Funny thing...the sky looked that same old gray when I wrote this, them I looked up and a beautiful pink sky! God is good.
Date: 2/3/2020 5:43:00 PM
W hat a clever cinqu kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/3/2020 7:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear friend!

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