Kim Rodrigues Poet Cinqku

Before Wonka

septic
nightfall scroll,
languishing bed...
indecent snores of kin
...restless

2/3/2020

Before Charlie unwrapped the golden ticket,
all 4 grandparents rested in a slow death bed.
Willie Wonka of Chocolate Factory fame saved
their life (Author Roald Dahl)

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Demetrios Trifiatis February 4, 2020 at 3:41 AM Witty dearest, Kim! Good luck! ...I am not a sceptic...! Kim Rodrigues February 4, 2020 at 6:55 AM Glad you enjoyed, Demetrios! Funny thing...the sky looked that same old gray when I wrote this, them I looked up and a beautiful pink sky! God is good.

Jan Allison February 3, 2020 at 5:43 PM W hat a clever cinqu kim:-) Hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues February 3, 2020 at 7:25 PM Thank you so much, dear friend!