Before the Sun Set

Sun doesn't set now
But his blood was dried
I wanted only his love
But he wanted only the pride

Oh Rose you know how i love
Him,but he love my belonging
Our friendship is like dove
But he is not want to think

Oh Daisy you know what is truth 
He break my friendship
He cheated my faith
He only wanted my golden ship

He tell wrong about me to my sweety
She trust him not me
He cheated my beauty
And she didn't wanted to meet me

Hey my golden lands
You know my brother's hands 
You know his thoughts filled 
Of truth, he called him and killed him

Oh!he also called me
To tell sympathies
To me I jumped with knife on him 
And I put him on the mountain of pathies

In the rise of the day we are three to pray
My mother wait for till to give 
Food but i won't come to prey
Because i don't want to live
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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January 22, 2016 at 7:55 PM
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.....SKAT
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February 18, 2016 at 11:49 PM
thank you I am your fan
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Your welcome
A   Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 10:39 PM
WOW, sad & deep. Impressed... LINDA
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October 26, 2015 at 11:15 PM
thanks
Nyaga Avatar
October 26, 2015 at 7:46 AM
a piece filled with gloom and sadness
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October 26, 2015 at 11:16 PM
Yes,thank you
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