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Before the Sun Set

Sun doesn't set now But his blood was dried I wanted only his love But he wanted only the pride Oh Rose you know how i love Him,but he love my belonging Our friendship is like dove But he is not want to think Oh Daisy you know what is truth He break my friendship He cheated my faith He only wanted my golden ship He tell wrong about me to my sweety She trust him not me He cheated my beauty And she didn't wanted to meet me Hey my golden lands You know my brother's hands You know his thoughts filled Of truth, he called him and killed him Oh!he also called me To tell sympathies To me I jumped with knife on him And I put him on the mountain of pathies In the rise of the day we are three to pray My mother wait for till to give Food but i won't come to prey Because i don't want to live

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/22/2016 7:55:00 PM
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.....SKAT
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Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 2/18/2016 11:49:00 PM
thank you I am your fan
Date: 10/26/2015 11:21:00 PM
Your welcome
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Date: 10/26/2015 10:39:00 PM
WOW, sad & deep. Impressed... LINDA
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Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 10/26/2015 11:15:00 PM
thanks
Date: 10/26/2015 7:46:00 AM
a piece filled with gloom and sadness
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Ananthasagaran Narayanapillai
Date: 10/26/2015 11:16:00 PM
Yes,thank you

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