Eve Roper Poet Quatorzain

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Before the Night-ITQ

Before the day turned into night
A nascent sun, spun brilliant light.
A vast kaleidoscope alight
Nature's tinted hues soothing sight.

Romance true nature, appeasing
Soul with its eyes and voice, pleasing
True aphrodisiac teasing
Even for a moment squeezing.

Then, slowly drawing a deep breath,
Parting footprints the daytime hath
Said, its turquoise depth parting death.
Mourn the day, single shibboleth.

Rhythm poetics feel to begin,
Fervor whisper snore from within. 

1/30/2024

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Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2024 at 2:15 PM Hey. I am trying to recall whose challenge this was. I can't find a poem. Of mine with itq after it

Vijay Pandit February 1, 2024 at 12:01 PM Splendid images weaved with emotions-- a wonderful poem, Eve.

Andrea Dietrich January 31, 2024 at 11:03 PM Wow stunning work and one of the best I have seen in this challenge

Hiya Sharma January 31, 2024 at 1:36 AM This poem is such a poetic journey, dear Eve, exploring vivid realms of emotions, your lines travel from the radiance of 'nascent sun' and reach the 'parting footprints of daytime' .. So impeccably you've infused heartfelt feelings here with brilliant wordsmithery and painted an enchanting imagery which truly stirs the soul, in many ways.. I especially loved "True aphrodisiac teasing", "its turquoise depth parting death", "Rhythm poetics feel to begin" Absolutely stunning! Eve Roper January 31, 2024 at 7:02 AM Thank you for your compliment, Hiya. Your word of encouragement warms my heart. Hugs and many blessings

Victor Buhagiar January 30, 2024 at 10:54 PM Incredibly beautiful. Wonderful imagery. I love this poem. It brings out the best of you. Hugs.