Before the Light

It’s a watercolour morning  
The sky a wash of grey    
In the gloom before sunrise  
No motion or sound, but for the  
raindrops in the river   
making broad brush circles 
that briefly touch then disappear 
subsumed by the water  
hidden by the ochre reeds  
that huddle in mock attention  
waiting for the palette  
of dawn to colour the day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Jordan Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Great read Kaye, had me wishing for rainy season here in the San Francisco Bay Area. Always a friend/Poet KJ
Smith Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 1:19 PM
How beautiful..love it Kaye..hugs Tim
Locke Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 3:14 AM
Thanks Tim, glad you liked it!
Ferguson Avatar
July 5, 2014 at 6:17 AM
that is so pretty I loved it thank you
Austin Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 1:17 PM
This is smooth and delicious, Kay. Congrats on the selection. daver
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2010 at 12:43 PM
colorful indeed
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