Before the Kiss

Flashing the fragrance of her mind to every soul she dared to trust
Beneath the veil a lone, wet flower longing to open for a sunlight.
But the naughty rain drenched her, until her petals fell and faded-
and when the God of Sky raised his face,
she was no more.. too soiled for a gentle kiss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:20 PM
Nice analogy there. There are kisses --- and there are KISSes, I now see. ~ Sun-drenched
Somadas Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 8:56 PM
haha.. Thanks Gershon..
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