James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Before the Fog

Going against each others grain, so we despise
Out there are many, each other through their eyes
For it's against the against, what matters so 

Encircled we are, formed we wreathe
How can alleged intelligence be whom we breathe 
The viewing I now view, contradicts who we are

Gallantly pushing the button, our worlds now in pause
Never knowing the destruction they would cause
Idiots, imbeciles, superlatives they were not
To imagine their thoughts, to begin their begin
For such memories, such memories, engulfed in our sin
Inching to be what we were, now understandably slow
Lifetimes have past from those days of long ago



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Sara Kendrick July 18, 2014 at 4:04 PM Interesting work..Enjoyed reading it today..We do go against each other's grain sometimes don't we..If we don't react impetuously to the person, events usually work out just fine..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent reading and taking time to comment.Sara James Fraser July 19, 2014 at 11:46 AM Thanks for visiting Sara :)

Charmaine Chircop July 5, 2014 at 3:31 PM The view defimitely contradicts who We are..leaving a question of who we re going to be tomorrow? James Fraser July 5, 2014 at 4:19 PM Hiya Charmaine, thanks kindly for your lovely warm words, always absorbed by this 'Highlander' I'm glad you liked this poem, as it's the exact opposite of 'Lifting the Fog' :)

Jan Allison July 4, 2014 at 4:51 PM James I love the way you have turned the original poem totally on its head yet it still makes perfect sense - its incredible my friend! hugs Jan x James Fraser July 4, 2014 at 5:12 PM Many thanks Jan, just a little bit of thinking, and hey! it's there for all, chowa............ :)