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Before The First Dawn Appears






Before the first hint of dawn appears
let me not shed a tear 
For life is meant to be lived
without doubt or fear.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/1/2024 10:50:00 AM

Few words with much said. No fear... Enjoy your day writing away...............

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/27/2024 3:28:00 AM

I hear you. For sure, live life bravely and, if possible, die like Cyrano -- I know you have suffered some heartbreaking loses of dear loved one's recently -- it is never easy. For no one, no matter how enlightened. Myself, my only regret, as the sands are far fewer, and my chances lessening, sounds silly, but I was really hoping to see a genuine flying saucer up close, and little green men. Oh well, next trip maybe. If there are any out there, reading this. Send me Soup Mail.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/28/2024 3:26:00 AM

soup mail lol

Gary Radice

Date: 9/26/2024 12:19:00 AM

Life certainly is a gift and something that we can all take for granted at times. There was something read out at a friend’s funeral - I can’t remember the exact words - but it was something like “sad that he died but glad that he lived” I recalled it reading your four lines here. I’m sorry to hear about your sister in law. Cheers - Gary

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/25/2024 10:43:00 AM

Dear Rose, I loved it for it is full of courage and beauty to a life well lived. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/25/2024 6:30:00 PM

Life is all about courage and being brave, thanks for the uplifting comment dearest Daniel

Peonieslore xo

Date: 9/25/2024 8:43:00 AM

Another beautiful poem, i expect nothing less from you. Pleasure reading

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/25/2024 6:29:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the poem Peonie

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/25/2024 8:27:00 AM

Words of wisdom Vie, hope your week is going well. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 9/26/2024 9:21:00 AM

Sorry to hear that Vie, my condolences to you.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/25/2024 6:29:00 PM

It is so far, had a rough week with my sister in laws funeral, still grieving her, but we will be ok, thanks for reading Tom :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/25/2024 6:54:00 AM

Ahh, Amen! So true, i thought as i completed my read. And, oh! So many volumes held within so few exemplary words. Cheers, Vie…Blessings to you with my love, sally

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/25/2024 6:28:00 PM

Yes dear Sally, stay brave and never fear the future. love