For Charles Messina's Before The Day Turned Into Night Poetry Contest
a poem that I forgot to enter into Charles' contest
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Before the day turned into night, the sun was shining big and bright. It was indeed a wondrous sight that filled my heart with such delight. In afternoon there came a breeze which fluttered leaves upon the trees. My strands of hair it liked to tease, but in the heat I felt at ease. Before long, twilight time had come. The sky turned rose, and then to plum. Enchanted by it I’d become. Such beauty – where does it come from? The easy answer? From above comes beauty from our God of love.
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