Before the Concert

A cacophony of sounds, all jumbled together
   Random notes, dissonance everywhere

Violin bows saw the air lazily, effortlessly
   Then furiously, chins pressed hard to instruments

Flautists' lips wistfully poised above the holes
   In a flash, diving deep into spritely melodies
 
Trombonists' brass bars sliding outward, then back inward
   Deep tones scale upward, peak, descend again 

Trumpeters' cheeks bulge outward, double-chins aflame
   Beet-red faces, fingers marching, horns tootling

Cymbals clang and clash!  Drums beat and boom!
   Clarinets clamor... A cello... An oboe... The conductor's in slow-mo.

All this, prelude to a performance quite grand
   To the concert forthcoming -- Strike up the band!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Back with well deserved congrats for your top win, Gershon!
Pett Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 4:49 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gershon, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your excellent verse. :))
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Thank you much, Roy! ~ Gershon
Rowe Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:12 PM
This is wonderful and an interesting perspective on the chaos that precedes the beautiful symphony. Congrats on your top finish.
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 3:56 PM
"Chaos" --- so well put, Jesse... And yet, not chaotic, interestingly. :) gw
Ashley Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 5:28 PM
Returning with happy congratulations, Gershon, for your well deserved win with this beautifully expressive and stunning poem.. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 7:45 PM
the thriving is mutual, my dear friend.. :))
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Very sweet of you to return to this one on the same day that you first viewed it. … You realize, I'm sure, that I thrive on your praise. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Best always, Gershon
Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:24 PM
Oh, your poetic awesomeness shines in this delightful poem, Gershon. You describe the pre-concert musical warm-ups and fine-tuning perfectly and beautifully. Stunning imagery that makes my heart sing.. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, Susan. If I can make your heart sing, I must be doing SOMETHING right. Appreciate your support---always! Best wishes, Gershon
B. Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:16 PM
An incredible verse, dear friend.. Wonderful and filled with fantastic imagery. . BRAVO!! Many blessings, my friend..
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Glad that you enjoyed it, Robertina! :) gw
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:44 PM
Great imagery Gershon, I can almost hear it. Well written. Tom
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Those words are music to MY ears, Tom. Thank you so much for a comment which makes my day! Best wishes, Gershon
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:47 PM
The imagery made me smile and the piece is music to my ears GW thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:05 PM
Great. When you smile, Jan, the whole world smiles with you! :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:06 PM
Awesome imagery, Gershon. Love this lively poem.
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, Line. Glad it came alive for you! :) gw
Faulkner Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:40 PM
This transported me right to the concert - so impressed by all the instruments you know!
Wolf Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Just wait until you hear me play them. Pure...dissonance! (LOL). Thank you for the support! :) gw
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