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Before the Concert

A cacophony of sounds, all jumbled together Random notes, dissonance everywhere Violin bows saw the air lazily, effortlessly Then furiously, chins pressed hard to instruments Flautists' lips wistfully poised above the holes In a flash, diving deep into spritely melodies Trombonists' brass bars sliding outward, then back inward Deep tones scale upward, peak, descend again Trumpeters' cheeks bulge outward, double-chins aflame Beet-red faces, fingers marching, horns tootling Cymbals clang and clash! Drums beat and boom! Clarinets clamor... A cello... An oboe... The conductor's in slow-mo. All this, prelude to a performance quite grand To the concert forthcoming -- Strike up the band!

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Date: 9/8/2018 5:51:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats for your top win, Gershon!
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Date: 9/4/2018 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Gershon, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your excellent verse. :))
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2018 3:57:00 PM
Thank you much, Roy! ~ Gershon
Date: 9/3/2018 8:12:00 PM
This is wonderful and an interesting perspective on the chaos that precedes the beautiful symphony. Congrats on your top finish.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/4/2018 3:56:00 PM
"Chaos" --- so well put, Jesse... And yet, not chaotic, interestingly. :) gw
Date: 9/3/2018 5:28:00 PM
Returning with happy congratulations, Gershon, for your well deserved win with this beautifully expressive and stunning poem.. Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Susan Ashley
Date: 9/3/2018 7:45:00 PM
the thriving is mutual, my dear friend.. :))
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Date: 9/3/2018 6:13:00 PM
Very sweet of you to return to this one on the same day that you first viewed it. … You realize, I'm sure, that I thrive on your praise. Thank you, thank you, thank you! Best always, Gershon
Date: 9/2/2018 11:24:00 PM
Oh, your poetic awesomeness shines in this delightful poem, Gershon. You describe the pre-concert musical warm-ups and fine-tuning perfectly and beautifully. Stunning imagery that makes my heart sing.. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/3/2018 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. If I can make your heart sing, I must be doing SOMETHING right. Appreciate your support---always! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 9/2/2018 6:16:00 PM
An incredible verse, dear friend.. Wonderful and filled with fantastic imagery. . BRAVO!! Many blessings, my friend..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 11:06:00 PM
Glad that you enjoyed it, Robertina! :) gw
Date: 9/2/2018 5:44:00 PM
Great imagery Gershon, I can almost hear it. Well written. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2018 11:05:00 PM
Those words are music to MY ears, Tom. Thank you so much for a comment which makes my day! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 9/2/2018 4:47:00 PM
The imagery made me smile and the piece is music to my ears GW thanks for sharing:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 11:05:00 PM
Great. When you smile, Jan, the whole world smiles with you! :) gw
Date: 9/2/2018 4:06:00 PM
Awesome imagery, Gershon. Love this lively poem.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 11:04:00 PM
Thank you, Line. Glad it came alive for you! :) gw
Date: 9/2/2018 3:40:00 PM
This transported me right to the concert - so impressed by all the instruments you know!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 3:48:00 PM
Just wait until you hear me play them. Pure...dissonance! (LOL). Thank you for the support! :) gw

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