Before Seeing the Exploding Star

night after fall
seduction by darkness
song hidden in silence
measures lying
between contours
shadow fields
stillness
the color of dreams
stillness
fields shadow
contours between
lying measures
silence in hidden song
darkness by seduction
fall after night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2020 at 6:42 PM
I agree with david down here. you do so well with imagery, Mike.
Mchattie Avatar
November 20, 2020 at 8:07 PM
Wonderful imagery my friend. A true delight. Stay well.
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