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Before My Eyes

my thoughts drift when I look to starry night prayers with aplomb consulting our Lord approving star winks clouds silhouette the moon whiz kiss upon lighten cheek chase the night morning charm before my eyes enormity of earth to fit in one hand 5/1/2018

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Date: 5/3/2018 2:46:00 PM
winks, silhouette, whiz, enormity, all words I always mean to use, but almost never do. I like these words a lot, and think your poem is profoundly pretty and you have done a great job here.
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Date: 5/3/2018 12:50:00 PM
Pondering on these lines I confirm our minuteness when compared to His creative immensity, Eve. Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/3/2018 10:26:00 AM
Nicely done images, Eve ... The last three lines are fascinating ...
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:03:00 AM
I like this perspective you have shared.
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Date: 5/2/2018 1:12:00 AM
Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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