Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Before My Eyes

my thoughts drift
when I look to starry night
prayers with aplomb
consulting our Lord


approving star winks
clouds silhouette the moon
whiz kiss upon lighten cheek 
chase the night 
morning charm

before my eyes
enormity of earth 
to fit in one hand



5/1/2018

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Caren Krutsinger May 3, 2018 at 2:46 PM winks, silhouette, whiz, enormity, all words I always mean to use, but almost never do. I like these words a lot, and think your poem is profoundly pretty and you have done a great job here.

Paul Callus May 3, 2018 at 12:50 PM Pondering on these lines I confirm our minuteness when compared to His creative immensity, Eve. Hugs // paul

Probir Gupta May 3, 2018 at 10:26 AM Nicely done images, Eve ... The last three lines are fascinating ...

Richard Lamoureux May 3, 2018 at 8:03 AM I like this perspective you have shared.

Ravi Sathasivam May 2, 2018 at 1:12 AM Excellent. Very thoughtful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.