Ravi Sathasivam Poet Light Verse

Before I Love, I Lost My Love

Before I Love, I Lost My Love....

I remember that day when we came to know each other
We had a good chat and shared with all our views
That day and night, I could not sleep and kept on watching
all those stars in the sky and thinking of you
The moments we shared were so special and unforgettable
You were so shy and young to say or do anything about it
I felt that I was in love with you 
I want to tell you that how much I love you
I want to tell you what I feel for you
I want to tell you that when I think of you my heart twist inside
But at that time I thought it was too soon to tell you
Since I was working in another city, I could not meet you
My days have passed with your loving thoughts
I was counting my days to get back to you
and tell you what was stored in my mind for only you
I felt my warm of love with you would melt the winter snows
Suddenly I received a message from your friend
that you had an accident and died in the hospital
I was so shocked and a tear runs down my cheek
My dream with you was shattered and everything
I believed is not here, you have gone to heaven
I know deep in my soul that I will not see you until it's my time
Before I start my love with you, I have lost my love
Now I sit all alone in my room as memories unfold
May be you might hear my cry and beating of my heart in pain forever
I miss you my love where ever you are always

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Maria Williams April 13, 2018 at 6:56 AM I feel the sad emotion that you expressed so well in this poem Ravi. I hope it was only fiction?....Maria

Sunita U.D Palawon June 16, 2017 at 11:07 AM I share what Andrea said below...indeed very sad. I do hope it does not happen with someone. Full of emotions. :) Ravi Sathasivam July 2, 2017 at 3:34 AM Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich May 19, 2017 at 9:21 AM a very sad poem that you beautifully emoted, Ravi. Write on! Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 1:59 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi

Eve Roper May 18, 2017 at 6:53 PM Memories of romance always in your heart, Ravi, your write really shows your love of your beloved. But so sad of the loss love ~* Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 2:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Paul Callus May 18, 2017 at 12:26 PM How very sad and tragic, Ravi! It is terrible to find love, only to lose straight away. Hopefully this is only fiction. Regards // paul Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 2:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Connie Marcum Wong May 17, 2017 at 7:02 PM It is so sad to think of what might have been...to see if she had feelings for you too. Haunting regrets. You expressed your feelings beautifully Ravi. ; ) 7 Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 2:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Anne-Marie Coreggia May 17, 2017 at 8:24 AM What a heartbreaking story Ravi. We certainly feel the pain relentlessly making its way through this very touching poem. Amitiés Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 2:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2017 at 6:28 AM - A terrible experience, losing the one you love, Ravi ... without having the opportunity to tell you love ... I hope this is not a true description ... but I feel it's true - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ravi Sathasivam May 29, 2017 at 1:59 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi