Before I Love, I Lost My Love

Before I Love, I Lost My Love.... I remember that day when we came to know each other We had a good chat and shared with all our views That day and night, I could not sleep and kept on watching all those stars in the sky and thinking of you The moments we shared were so special and unforgettable You were so shy and young to say or do anything about it I felt that I was in love with you I want to tell you that how much I love you I want to tell you what I feel for you I want to tell you that when I think of you my heart twist inside But at that time I thought it was too soon to tell you Since I was working in another city, I could not meet you My days have passed with your loving thoughts I was counting my days to get back to you and tell you what was stored in my mind for only you I felt my warm of love with you would melt the winter snows Suddenly I received a message from your friend that you had an accident and died in the hospital I was so shocked and a tear runs down my cheek My dream with you was shattered and everything I believed is not here, you have gone to heaven I know deep in my soul that I will not see you until it's my time Before I start my love with you, I have lost my love Now I sit all alone in my room as memories unfold May be you might hear my cry and beating of my heart in pain forever I miss you my love where ever you are always Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ Ravi Sathasivam-2017
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Date: 4/13/2018 6:56:00 AM
I feel the sad emotion that you expressed so well in this poem Ravi. I hope it was only fiction?....Maria
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Date: 6/16/2017 11:07:00 AM
I share what Andrea said below...indeed very sad. I do hope it does not happen with someone. Full of emotions. :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/2/2017 3:34:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Appreciated.
Date: 5/19/2017 9:21:00 AM
a very sad poem that you beautifully emoted, Ravi. Write on!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/29/2017 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi
Date: 5/18/2017 6:53:00 PM
Memories of romance always in your heart, Ravi, your write really shows your love of your beloved. But so sad of the loss love ~*
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/29/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 5/18/2017 12:26:00 PM
How very sad and tragic, Ravi! It is terrible to find love, only to lose straight away. Hopefully this is only fiction. Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/29/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 5/17/2017 7:02:00 PM
It is so sad to think of what might have been...to see if she had feelings for you too. Haunting regrets. You expressed your feelings beautifully Ravi. ; ) 7
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/29/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 5/17/2017 8:24:00 AM
What a heartbreaking story Ravi. We certainly feel the pain relentlessly making its way through this very touching poem. Amitiés
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 5/29/2017 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem my friend. Very much appreciated. Ravi
Date: 5/17/2017 6:28:00 AM
- A terrible experience, losing the one you love, Ravi ... without having the opportunity to tell you love ... I hope this is not a true description ... but I feel it's true - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 1:59:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment on my poem. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love xxxx Ravi
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