Before Goodbye

The daisy chain you entwined
still hangs upon the mirror.
Although withered now and dry
its reflection does remind;
and brings me always nearer
to that we had, before goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 7:41 AM
beautiful ~ touching
Miller Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Thank you so much
Junaid Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 3:25 AM
quite beautiful. congratulations!
Miller Avatar
August 13, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Thank you
mysore Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 1:12 AM
congratulations dear poet. happy writing.
Miller Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Thank you so much
Crandall Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 5:34 PM
Nice poem Terry, simple, elegant, pretty, poignant.
Miller Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Thank you David
George Avatar
July 3, 2024 at 5:17 AM
Memories linger. If something is left behind by a loved one as a memoir or a gift, each time we look on it, thoughts will come crowding about the person. Hope you keep fine, dear Terry.
Miller Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 12:50 AM
And you Valsa, thank you
Wolf Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Poignant penning, Terry. Two thumbs up, Gershon
Miller Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Thank you Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 9:25 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful yet sad "Before Goodbye" write. Great memories are the best kind to have. Have a Blessed day writing away..............
Miller Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 1:52 AM
Thank you so Much Paula
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