Eponine Seccafico Poet Rhyme

Before Creation

Lost, the love of two. 
In the mind, nothing but true. 
Was it in the shaking hand? 
Gold engraved, his promise band.  
Away, away, away.
Away, away, away.

Lost, the spirit whole. 
In his eyes, a loving soul. 
In my mind, a haunting fright. 
In himself, a loss of light. 
Away, away, away. 
Away, away, away.

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Paris-Maree Boreham April 24, 2021 at 12:10 PM WOW reads lyrical, now you have me thinking "away away away" hmmm Thanks for sharing your poetry ! Kindest regards Paris-Maree Eponine Seccafico April 24, 2021 at 12:33 PM Thank you so much for your comment! Good insight! It was intended to have a lyrical feel to it. It was written as a sort of prequel to the demo of Kurt Cobain’s song Creation. His song inspired this poem!