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Before Computers

Do you remember before computers We actually spoke with each other We cared whenever our kids got sick And knew the address of our mother Today we sit at our laptops all day Surrounded by dirty old dishes Wearing clothes from a two weeks ago Smelling like a kettle of fishes What is this crazy old world coming to Lost sight of the things that matter Like how many kids we had at last count Or that we're thirty pound fatter! We sit like a proverbial bump on a log Our words incoherent and slurred All kinds of animals are running about Your pet cat just ate your pet bird Maybe one day in a decade of two They'll discover what once was a human Propped in front of an ancient computer In his ears petunias will be bloomin' © Jack Ellison 2012

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Date: 4/1/2018 4:24:00 AM
I was born in the early 90's, so I've pretty much been around computers all my life. There are many many distractions in this world - more so as technology advances. It can be dangerous at times. I like your humor at the end. Well done. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 4/1/2018 7:16:00 AM
YIKES... the early 90s!!! I was old even then!!!! LOL Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX
Date: 11/12/2012 2:27:00 PM
Jack you forgot the telephone, reader, computer combo thingies... There're becoming like mobile zombies that can't drive or move around without texting it.
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Date: 11/12/2012 5:51:00 PM
Sad state of affairs eh Carol! "mobile zombies" great description! Love from Cathie & me to you and your Dad! xxx
Date: 11/12/2012 1:29:00 PM
Sad tale Jack! I may be that guy, I never thought of myself becoming a flower pot. I guess there could be worse things.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2012 1:39:00 PM
However, a very creative flower pot! LOL
Date: 11/12/2012 5:59:00 AM
Yes it's true Jack .... But without my computer, I had not gotten to know you. - It had been a little less smile and laugh ...... Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/12/2012 6:09:00 AM
You are so so sweet my dear lady from Norway! And I would not have gotten to know you... so long live computers! Love and big big hugs from Canada! xox

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