Before Computers

Do you remember before computers
We actually spoke with each other
We cared whenever our kids got sick
And knew the address of our mother

Today we sit at our laptops all day
Surrounded by dirty old dishes
Wearing clothes from a two weeks ago
Smelling like a kettle of fishes

What is this crazy old world coming to
Lost sight of the things that matter
Like how many kids we had at last count
Or that we're thirty pound fatter!

We sit like a proverbial bump on a log
Our words incoherent and slurred
All kinds of animals are running about
Your pet cat just ate your pet bird

Maybe one day in a decade of two
They'll discover what once was a human
Propped in front of an ancient computer
In his ears petunias will be bloomin'

© Jack Ellison 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 4:24 AM
I was born in the early 90's, so I've pretty much been around computers all my life. There are many many distractions in this world - more so as technology advances. It can be dangerous at times. I like your humor at the end. Well done. Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 7:16 AM
YIKES... the early 90s!!! I was old even then!!!! LOL Lovsies, Happy Jack XOX
Eastman Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 2:27 PM
Jack you forgot the telephone, reader, computer combo thingies... There're becoming like mobile zombies that can't drive or move around without texting it.
Ellison Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Sad state of affairs eh Carol! "mobile zombies" great description! Love from Cathie & me to you and your Dad! xxx
Lamoureux Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 1:29 PM
Sad tale Jack! I may be that guy, I never thought of myself becoming a flower pot. I guess there could be worse things.
Ellison Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 1:39 PM
However, a very creative flower pot! LOL
Andresen Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 5:59 AM
Yes it's true Jack .... But without my computer, I had not gotten to know you. - It had been a little less smile and laugh ...... Wish you a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ellison Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 6:09 AM
You are so so sweet my dear lady from Norway! And I would not have gotten to know you... so long live computers! Love and big big hugs from Canada! xox
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