James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Before Comfortably Numb

In my mind I'm falling into a darkening welcoming abyss
I'm smiling as I fall knowing there's lives in loving bliss
So many moments of my past in contribute they be
That decide my tomorrow's to become eternally free

Witnessing marvellous moments that my eyes caressed
It's just a matter of time when I've reached my quest
Memories aplenty caress my minds awaiting succumb
Wishing I could play the guitar, before comfortably numb

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M. L. Kiser November 13, 2019 at 5:31 PM Ooh, well penned.

James Horn August 1, 2019 at 4:15 PM Gather that you never answer comments made about your poem. Will you be writing another one soon?

Kristie Raburn April 15, 2019 at 5:40 PM I an not sure in the numbness comes from the carpel tunnel in your hands from playing the guitar or from the numbness in your heart from playing with love...either way...I like your poem. Good job!