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Before Comfortably Numb

In my mind I'm falling into a darkening welcoming abyss I'm smiling as I fall knowing there's lives in loving bliss So many moments of my past in contribute they be That decide my tomorrow's to become eternally free Witnessing marvellous moments that my eyes caressed It's just a matter of time when I've reached my quest Memories aplenty caress my minds awaiting succumb Wishing I could play the guitar, before comfortably numb

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Date: 11/13/2019 5:31:00 PM
Ooh, well penned.
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Date: 8/1/2019 4:15:00 PM
Gather that you never answer comments made about your poem. Will you be writing another one soon?
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Date: 4/15/2019 5:40:00 PM
I an not sure in the numbness comes from the carpel tunnel in your hands from playing the guitar or from the numbness in your heart from playing with love...either way...I like your poem. Good job!
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