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Before Bed

Want to come stand on the balcony with me? Look at the lights as we stand over the city. It's cold outside, so you can barrow my sweater...Actually keep it. I think were going to grow old together.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/1/2024 9:43:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/11/2016 11:12:00 AM
R GREEN, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry, LINDA
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Date: 2/9/2011 10:07:00 AM
Welcome to poetrySoup R. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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