Before & After {double Septulet}

I
Once was
So soulless
Malevolent
Evilness
Became 
Me

All
Who give
Praise to God
Will discover
He forgives
All our
Sins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Ismail Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 1:13 AM
A great style.superb
Otieng Avatar
July 16, 2017 at 9:32 AM
Indeed He forgives our sins. Nice poem Jordan.
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August 25, 2008 at 2:49 PM
beautiful and so refreshing. God Bless you Michael you are a good friend.
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