Before and After

Prior to my retirement the fog was out there
                                                          ~ Now it is in here
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Tor Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 8:10 PM
No fog here in this Poetry my friend, your mind is hitting on all cylinders.
Baker Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 4:25 PM
Made my smile with this Monoku, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:21 PM
Good. Keep smiling, Bill. Cheers, gw
Krutsinger Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 10:36 PM
Oh, this is why I shall never retire.
Wolf Avatar
August 9, 2022 at 5:21 PM
You know, you've got a great point, there, Caren. Doesn't take long for that 'fog' to set in once the rat race dies down...
Salehi Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Oh, congratulations... what's wrong with fog... In this world, with all of these negativities, I do not mind having a foggy mind and seeing only fog...
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:22 PM
As long you don't mind, Pashang, I hereby bequeath all my current and future supply of fog to you. Thank you for your magnanimity! Smiles, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 2:05 PM
LOL. I have been retired so long I can't remember where the fog was. LOL..I enjoyed your humor in this one. Made my day. Sara
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:19 PM
Fog? Fog? What fog? What are we talking about, anyway?! lol. Thanks, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 4:04 PM
LOL! Tell me about it!
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:17 PM
O.K., I shall. You see, there's this fog in my brain. You see it, but I'm left blind. ~ Weep for me no more...
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 2:21 PM
just listen for the little cats feet
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:15 PM
e.e. ... e.e. ... e.e. ... I feel it cummings! Thanks for the laugh, John!
Bauer Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:28 PM
Ha! I can totally relate, Gershon!
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:12 PM
You relate; I relate. We must be relatives! (All of Israel are brethren, they say). :) gw
Sangster - K Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 12:38 PM
Lol... :-D Join the club. Enjoy your day Gershon and keep on writing. It helps lift the fog. ;-)
Wolf Avatar
August 8, 2022 at 5:11 PM
Agreed. Staying active physically helps a whole lot too. Thanks, Anne.
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