Before and After

Prior to my retirement the fog was out there ~ Now it is in here

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Michael Tor

Date: 8/9/2022 8:10:00 PM

No fog here in this Poetry my friend, your mind is hitting on all cylinders.

Bill Baker

Date: 8/9/2022 4:25:00 PM

Made my smile with this Monoku, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2022 5:21:00 PM

Good. Keep smiling, Bill. Cheers, gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/8/2022 10:36:00 PM

Oh, this is why I shall never retire.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/9/2022 5:21:00 PM

You know, you've got a great point, there, Caren. Doesn't take long for that 'fog' to set in once the rat race dies down...

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/8/2022 4:56:00 PM

Oh, congratulations... what's wrong with fog... In this world, with all of these negativities, I do not mind having a foggy mind and seeing only fog...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/8/2022 5:22:00 PM

As long you don't mind, Pashang, I hereby bequeath all my current and future supply of fog to you. Thank you for your magnanimity! Smiles, Gershon