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Beeston Castle

An archway of oaks lead you upwards As you rise above the crowds. The sounds of everyday life fades away. A castle ruins silhouetted against a fading sun. And a patchwork view of fields as far as the eye can see. I lay near the summit breathing heavy And looking for my home on the horizon. The sun warming my face and the view my soul. Only a moat to breach now and victory will be mine. Beeston castle vanquished , once again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/20/2017 10:53:00 AM
Sometimes that moat is bigger than we imagine...good to see you posting
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/20/2017 11:12:00 AM
cheers Tim slowly getting my mo jo back , Its a true story went up the castle on thursday if you have not heard of beeston castle have a google took about 5 pit stops to get to top lol . was nice mind , inspiring in fact. stephen

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