M. L. Kiser Poet Acrostic

Bees Short Lived Boo Boo

B rewing her potions one Halloween eve, Witch Hazel
R eceived a sting from a bee;
E liciting the response of a flyswatter smack.
V ulnerable bee, he lay upon the dark, dank floor.
I nstead of sweeping away, little bee, Witch Hazel
T hrew him into her brew and laughed with glee,
Y a, haha, ha, I’ve got you now, take that for your sting!

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Janet Grace October 27, 2019 at 11:13 AM Cute and humorous, quite catchy, but I as a nature lover always say "Save the bees." LOL! M. L. Kiser November 6, 2019 at 1:31 PM Yes, we must somehow. Thanks so much.

Sandra Adams September 22, 2019 at 9:03 PM what did she do to the bee first to make him sting her? Thinking she was planning on cooking him up regardless...lol, cute poem :) hugs M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 7:17 PM Thanks, I love to have fun with poetry.

Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2019 at 1:42 AM Bess never harm you if you let them be - Witch Hazel had it in for the bee because the bee must have know she was NASTY and stung he, and so he died! Lovely verse, well penned my friend. Hugs, Jenny. M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 7:18 PM If you've ever seen that cartoon, Witch Hazel is a real nut case. Thanks.

Caren Krutsinger September 20, 2019 at 10:29 PM I am thinking you are getting in the mood for the next month, and I was just getting used to August weather in September. It will be hard to believe it is Witch's month if it is still 94 degrees! M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 7:19 PM Yes, it's still hot here, too. Thanks.

Line Gauthier September 20, 2019 at 7:44 PM Yes... Vengeance is a dish best served in a witch's brew. LOL M. L. Kiser September 27, 2019 at 7:19 PM Scary though. Thanks.