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Bees Knees

Humble,bumble bee One season's life,fly free Working the summer scene Unless crowned,as May Queen Sometime cousin cuckoo,comes to stay Her offspring eggs to lay A nursemaid,then,Spring to Fall 'Til Winter's death knell,calls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/16/2008 4:30:00 PM
I love bees some people are afraid of them I like to watch them, this brought a smile to my face, nice write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/14/2008 2:25:00 PM
I noticed bumble bees love the flowers of the basil plant. You probably are already aware. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 10/14/2008 5:11:00 AM
Brian, this offers the reader a suberb flow not only of words but of nature, the picture of the bees, the bird laying eggs. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 10/14/2008 4:02:00 AM
Very nicely written Brian. Images are strong and consistent..I especially love the last stanza..Great work.
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Date: 10/14/2008 3:43:00 AM
Very clever Brian. Enjoyed very much. Nice write. Blessings Michael
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