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Bees' Busyness

bothered
by their stingers
still I relish honey
better bypass bees' busyness
buzz off

11th gradecinquain

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Paula Goldsmith

February 6, 2025 at 11:12 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your sweet bee Cinquain write. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................

Reason A. Poteet

February 6, 2025 at 3:22 PM

Thanks for the read, a fun write. Just edited the last line, When I see a bee, I don't hang around and wonder why, I just buzz off. Safety first.

thriveni c mysore

February 4, 2025 at 8:43 PM

congratulations dear poet. three cheers !!!

Reason A. Poteet

February 4, 2025 at 8:47 PM

I welcome your commendation after the judging also, thriveni. Just noticed and corrected my failing fourth line which only had seven syllables.

thriveni c mysore

January 31, 2025 at 7:26 PM

'Bees do eat honey; it is their primary food source, they store it in their hive to consume when needed, especially during periods when flowers are scarce or weather is bad.' How sad we steal it. I do sip it as medicine when I have cough, not otherwise. Your cinquain set off a train of thoughts, Nice write dear poet. Happy writing.

Reason A. Poteet

February 4, 2025 at 8:44 PM

Thanks, thriveni, I appreciate your comments before judging which is a welcome treat here at PS. Have a gorgeous day tomorrow and the days that follow.

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