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Bees and Roses

This poem is in conjunction with the video.
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Bees and Roses

Look, how in love we are, us both.
Can you imagine, what I would do, 
To prove my love for you.
Climb a plant, to steal a rose. 
Oh no, I slipped, honey.
For your sweetness, I don’t mind,
a little bump, in my way.
To bring you, my sweet, a rose.
Together humming away.

Amen.

Copyright © Tahira Parveen | Year Posted 2017

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Ram R. V. Date: 9/26/2017 2:54:00 AM I like the theme and the lilt in your lyric:) Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 9/26/2017 11:33:00 AM Thank you for you lovely comment and visiting Ram:)

Alfred Berggren Date: 8/28/2017 1:34:00 PM Great video, great picture and great poem. It must take a lot of talent and skill to create such a worthwhile poem to read. Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/28/2017 2:48:00 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment Alfred:-)It does take a lot of time as well. I do a bit of art to compliment the poem. Again thank you for commenting.

Maryam Musharraf Date: 8/28/2017 5:18:00 AM So entertaining Tahera Jaan Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/28/2017 2:10:00 PM Thank you for lovely comment Maryam:)

Matthew Abuelo Date: 8/28/2017 12:48:00 AM I really like the imagery Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/28/2017 2:13:00 PM Thank you for your lovely comment Matthew:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 8/27/2017 11:01:00 PM Very nice depiction, Tahira. Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/28/2017 2:16:00 PM Thank you for your kind words subimal :)

Terry Shuff Date: 8/27/2017 12:56:00 PM Very romantic, effort, and sacrifice, necessary qualities fo lasting relationship. Demonstrated Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/27/2017 4:36:00 PM Thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, indeed the qualities required for a lasting relationship. Very well said Terry:)

Paul Callus Date: 8/24/2017 8:40:00 AM How lovely and cute, Tahira! I like the clever intentional play on words. Regards // paul Login to Reply Tahira Parveen Date: 8/24/2017 2:44:00 PM Thank you Paul for your lovely comment :-)