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This poem is in conjunction with the video. Please watch if you may.

This poem is in conjunction with the video. Please watch if you may.
Bees and Roses Look, how in love we are, us both. Can you imagine, what I would do, To prove my love for you. Climb a plant, to steal a rose. Oh no, I slipped, honey. For your sweetness, I don’t mind, a little bump, in my way. To bring you, my sweet, a rose. Together humming away. Amen.

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Date: 9/26/2017 2:54:00 AM
I like the theme and the lilt in your lyric:)
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 9/26/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thank you for you lovely comment and visiting Ram:)
Date: 8/28/2017 1:34:00 PM
Great video, great picture and great poem. It must take a lot of talent and skill to create such a worthwhile poem to read.
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/28/2017 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment Alfred:-)It does take a lot of time as well. I do a bit of art to compliment the poem. Again thank you for commenting.
Date: 8/28/2017 5:18:00 AM
So entertaining Tahera Jaan
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/28/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thank you for lovely comment Maryam:)
Date: 8/28/2017 12:48:00 AM
I really like the imagery
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/28/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment Matthew:)
Date: 8/27/2017 11:01:00 PM
Very nice depiction, Tahira.
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/28/2017 2:16:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words subimal :)
Date: 8/27/2017 12:56:00 PM
Very romantic, effort, and sacrifice, necessary qualities fo lasting relationship. Demonstrated
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/27/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, indeed the qualities required for a lasting relationship. Very well said Terry:)
Date: 8/24/2017 8:40:00 AM
How lovely and cute, Tahira! I like the clever intentional play on words. Regards // paul
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Tahira Parveen
Date: 8/24/2017 2:44:00 PM
Thank you Paul for your lovely comment :-)

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