Tahira Parveen Poet Free verse

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This poem is in conjunction with the video. Please watch if you may.

Bees and Roses

This poem is in conjunction with the video.
Please watch if you may.




Bees and Roses

Look, how in love we are, us both.
Can you imagine, what I would do, 
To prove my love for you.
Climb a plant, to steal a rose. 
Oh no, I slipped, honey.
For your sweetness, I don’t mind,
a little bump, in my way.
To bring you, my sweet, a rose.
Together humming away.

Amen.

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Ram R. V. September 26, 2017 at 2:54 AM I like the theme and the lilt in your lyric:) Tahira Parveen September 26, 2017 at 11:33 AM Thank you for you lovely comment and visiting Ram:)

Alfred Berggren August 28, 2017 at 1:34 PM Great video, great picture and great poem. It must take a lot of talent and skill to create such a worthwhile poem to read. Tahira Parveen August 28, 2017 at 2:48 PM Thank you so much for your lovely comment Alfred:-)It does take a lot of time as well. I do a bit of art to compliment the poem. Again thank you for commenting.

Maryam Musharraf August 28, 2017 at 5:18 AM So entertaining Tahera Jaan Tahira Parveen August 28, 2017 at 2:10 PM Thank you for lovely comment Maryam:)

Matthew Abuelo August 28, 2017 at 12:48 AM I really like the imagery Tahira Parveen August 28, 2017 at 2:13 PM Thank you for your lovely comment Matthew:)

Subimal Sinha-Roy August 27, 2017 at 11:01 PM Very nice depiction, Tahira. Tahira Parveen August 28, 2017 at 2:16 PM Thank you for your kind words subimal :)

Terry Shuff August 27, 2017 at 12:56 PM Very romantic, effort, and sacrifice, necessary qualities fo lasting relationship. Demonstrated Tahira Parveen August 27, 2017 at 4:36 PM Thank you for your lovely comment. Yes, indeed the qualities required for a lasting relationship. Very well said Terry:)

Paul Callus August 24, 2017 at 8:40 AM How lovely and cute, Tahira! I like the clever intentional play on words. Regards // paul Tahira Parveen August 24, 2017 at 2:44 PM Thank you Paul for your lovely comment :-)