Bees

What if bees were to rule the world! 
Humans mere creatures,
While the queen sat on her throne, 
Sending out her armies,
Their mission was to patrol the earth, 
Protecting all their nectar,
Keeping nature pure as honey,
In their charge positions, 
Antenna wave signals sent out,
Stopping people from killing all the plants,
Saving the next generation of bees,
Out they went early morning, with a sting in their tails,
Riding on the breeze like a wave,
Through the skies, they flew to their pollen,
Ate until they were drunk with fermented nectar,
They sang songs at their victory,
Hummed great tunes all the way home,
Arriving back as full as could be,
Queen frantically buzzing awaiting her males,
As they arrive back to deposit their spoils of war,

19/09/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ogundare Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 4:57 PM
And I'm back, just to congratulate you on your well deserved win Wendy. ..Abosede
Rycroft Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Thank you, Abo xxx
Troutman Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 11:21 PM
I really enjoyed reading this. Well deserved win ! Congrats
Rycroft Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 2:17 AM
Thank you Tanks x
Eldridge Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 4:37 PM
Congrats Enjoyed your perspective JE
Y. Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 11:00 PM
Hi Wendy, What a imagination you have. It shined in this humorous write. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Rycroft Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Alexis xx very kind of you x
Daniel Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:11 AM
Very imaginative, Wendy:) congratulations on your win:)
Rycroft Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:26 AM
Thank you Joe, xx
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 12:38 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win! X]
Rycroft Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:26 AM
Thank you, Sunita x
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:54 PM
I like how you took an imaginative slant with your entry. It is so creative. Congrats.
Rycroft Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 4:27 AM
Thank you Andrea, xx
Smith Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations Wendy, fine win...
May Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win Wendy
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win :-) Hugs
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, Eve, I'm happy x
Scars Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Wendy-loved this one :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:51 PM
Thank you laura Congrats to you also x
Haight Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 12:17 PM
Wonderful tribute to bees, Wendy, and very creatively written. Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, Sandra Im so happy x
Nayak Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Dear Wendy, back with my hearty congrats !// love, Anu:)
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, its great x
Rodrigues Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Love your take on this theme, Wendy! Congrats!
Rycroft Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Thank you, so much Kim x
Hamilton Avatar
September 29, 2016 at 11:41 AM
great poem full of humour Wendy well done on 3rd hugs
Roper Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Wow, Wendy, I love this poem a lot of action, place a perfect impression in my mind :) a 7 Hugs Eve
Rycroft Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:52 PM
Thank you, so much, Eve very kind of you x
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 27, 2016 at 11:33 AM
This is so full of wonders and hope that someone else should really come to teach us some lessons! Good Luck Wendy. It deserves a win! :)
Rycroft Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Thank you, Sunita, x
Maverick Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 2:59 PM
Hello Wendy, I reay enjoyed this flight of fancy, I hope it does well in the contest.'
Rycroft Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Joe x
Nayak Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 5:23 AM
Dear Wendy, Lovely write , enjoyed it, good luck in the contest, Love, Anu:)
Rycroft Avatar
September 26, 2016 at 6:10 AM
Thank you, Anulaxmi x
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 6:54 AM
- Wendy, a great poem - A loved and hated small animals, but very important for life on Earth - Luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rycroft Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Sunshine xxxx
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Where would we be without Bees - great write Wendy good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Thank you Jan xxx
Horsman Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 8:55 AM
Actually this is very deep Wendy, you question and answer, and with your wonderful mind, create a common sense poem.. a joy to read this is.
Rycroft Avatar
September 23, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Harry that's very kind of you xxx
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 3:28 PM
this is very creative writing, Wendy.Nicely done.
Rycroft Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Than you Andrea
A   Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:33 PM
I like bees, and I think we'd BEE in trouble if any of this ever happen... enjoyed. LINDA
Rycroft Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:10 PM
Thank you x Linda
Muideen Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Wow for this gem. I enjoy the pleasure it gives. Thank you for sharing this fascinating poem..............A.M.
Rycroft Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 10:11 PM
Thank you x Afolabi
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