Bees

I know some bees who won't leave. While buzzing around my head, Get in my clothes again. Your turn is up, SPLAT! Flowers,Bees, trees, contest Francine Roberts by Cory long

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 1:16:00 PM

Bees scare the life out of me, Cory. Loved your dodoitsu and hope you have seen Francine's comment below. Wishing you success in her contest! Hope you'll check out my contest as well. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/22/2011 1:13:00 PM

beautiful write on the theme of the contest, funny and humorous, cory

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/21/2011 9:26:00 PM

Awesome Cory! I'm glad you entered;) Good luck with this gem buddy. R.M. a.k.a. Matt

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/21/2011 5:24:00 PM

Ooops...they hung around just a mite too long!! Funny poem, Cory!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/21/2011 3:34:00 PM

hahaha,This is cute as can BEE (and splat it's gone!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/21/2011 11:20:00 AM

Oh how cute and clever u wrote this one cory ..it is a fantastic entry for the new contest.. good luck luv as I also wrote about bees ..we have so many here especially now.. well forget those bees today and come join in the fun of my birthday celebration via soup ... my soup family is as important as my personal family and they are so spoiling and pampering me today.. so join in my friend...

Francine Roberts

Date: 5/21/2011 9:54:00 AM

Cory this is not showing up on the contest page as entered, please check and re-enter