Bees

I know some bees who won't leave.
While buzzing around my head,
Get in my clothes again.
Your turn is up, SPLAT!




Flowers,Bees, trees, contest
Francine Roberts
by Cory long

naturedodoitsu

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Carolyn Devonshire

May 22, 2011 at 1:16 PM

Bees scare the life out of me, Cory. Loved your dodoitsu and hope you have seen Francine's comment below. Wishing you success in her contest! Hope you'll check out my contest as well. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 22, 2011 at 1:13 PM

beautiful write on the theme of the contest, funny and humorous, cory

Matt Hunt

May 21, 2011 at 9:26 PM

Awesome Cory! I'm glad you entered;) Good luck with this gem buddy. R.M. a.k.a. Matt

Carrie Richards

May 21, 2011 at 5:24 PM

Ooops...they hung around just a mite too long!! Funny poem, Cory!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

May 21, 2011 at 3:34 PM

hahaha,This is cute as can BEE (and splat it's gone!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 21, 2011 at 11:20 AM

Oh how cute and clever u wrote this one cory ..it is a fantastic entry for the new contest.. good luck luv as I also wrote about bees ..we have so many here especially now.. well forget those bees today and come join in the fun of my birthday celebration via soup ... my soup family is as important as my personal family and they are so spoiling and pampering me today.. so join in my friend...