Notes About The Poem

Bees

queen

l a y s

eggs


bees

m a k e

honey








Contest: In Just A Few Words
Sponsor: Joseph May

10/28/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
November 18, 2020 at 5:09 PM
Such a sweet vibrant poem, Alexis. Your music video is amazing as well. Mankind could learn lessons from the bees, birds, fish and spiders about using the land, sea and air without destroying their beauty.. A brilliant poetic presentation. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susan
Goldsmith Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Thank God for bees, love the honey. Enjoy your win...............
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:53 PM
knocks me off my shoes, amazing alexis... finest congrats on your win!...huggs
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:17 PM
Nice and simple Brevette, Alexis. Lovely reflection on this aspect of nature. Enjoyed the music as well, my friend. Congrats on your win! ~ John
Jayasankar Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:58 PM
So well done Brevette Alexis... Congrats on your win.. ~ Ani :)
Roper Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 8:50 PM
Very well done, Alexis, congratulations on your win, . Hugs Eve
Rose  Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:12 PM
Congrats on your win dear Alexis.
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:10 PM
Wow! Congrats, Alexis, on your win way up there close to the top. Keep buzzing! Smiles, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:43 PM
Nice, Alexis! Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:32 PM
I knew this would be a winner!many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Ranaweera  Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 1:56 PM
That's a honey-dripping thought, Alexis!! Congratulations on your top win for this well-deserving piece!!
Evans Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 1:36 PM
Sweetly done. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:31 PM
Wonderful write Alexis, Congrats on your win
Y. Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 12:33 PM
Hi Joseph, You brought an amazing form to our attention. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:46 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fowler Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on the win Alexis! Linda
Buehler Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 10:24 PM
This is utterly beautiful, Alexis. I love the video, too. :)
Callus Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 12:21 PM
Short and sweet as honey, Alexis :) gl in the contest. Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Hi Paul, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Mcintosh Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:00 AM
You've got this!!! This is amazing. Love it. God bless you
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:30 PM
wtg you got the video on :-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:14 AM
Once you get the hang of it it's easy, so happy I could help xx
Y. Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 9:25 PM
Hi Jan, Thank you so much telling how to attach the video to the poem. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
Rose  Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 5:24 PM
Really amazing creatures of nature aren't they, nice line dear poetess
James Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Pure sweet gold, Good luck in the contest Alexis, Emilia : )
Wolf Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Very good! Can't get much shorter than this! G.L. in the context, Alexis. :) Gershon
Buhagiar Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:53 PM
short and sweet. ~~
Cunningham Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:36 PM
I just love the stuff, always a spoonful on my cereal. Good luck. Tom PS. Soupmail.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2020 at 12:10 PM
- ... yellow ... and sweet :) - GL in the contest, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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