Notes About The Poem

Bees

queen

l a y s

eggs


bees

m a k e

honey








Contest: In Just A Few Words
Sponsor: Joseph May

10/28/2020

natureverse

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/18/2020 5:09:00 PM

Such a sweet vibrant poem, Alexis. Your music video is amazing as well. Mankind could learn lessons from the bees, birds, fish and spiders about using the land, sea and air without destroying their beauty.. A brilliant poetic presentation. Congratulations for your excellent win in Joseph's contest.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/4/2020 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Few words with much said. Thank God for bees, love the honey. Enjoy your win...............

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/2/2020 6:53:00 PM

knocks me off my shoes, amazing alexis... finest congrats on your win!...huggs

John Watt

Date: 10/31/2020 11:17:00 PM

Nice and simple Brevette, Alexis. Lovely reflection on this aspect of nature. Enjoyed the music as well, my friend. Congrats on your win! ~ John

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/31/2020 10:58:00 PM

So well done Brevette Alexis... Congrats on your win.. ~ Ani :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2020 8:50:00 PM

Very well done, Alexis, congratulations on your win, . Hugs Eve

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/31/2020 6:12:00 PM

Congrats on your win dear Alexis.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2020 6:10:00 PM

Wow! Congrats, Alexis, on your win way up there close to the top. Keep buzzing! Smiles, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/31/2020 3:43:00 PM

Nice, Alexis! Congratulations!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/31/2020 2:32:00 PM

I knew this would be a winner!many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/31/2020 1:56:00 PM

That's a honey-dripping thought, Alexis!! Congratulations on your top win for this well-deserving piece!!

Marilene Evans

Date: 10/31/2020 1:36:00 PM

Sweetly done. Congrats on your win.

Joseph May

Date: 10/31/2020 12:31:00 PM

Wonderful write Alexis, Congrats on your win

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/31/2020 12:33:00 PM

Hi Joseph, You brought an amazing form to our attention. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2020 11:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/31/2020 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Alexis! Linda

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/29/2020 10:24:00 PM

This is utterly beautiful, Alexis. I love the video, too. :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/29/2020 12:21:00 PM

Short and sweet as honey, Alexis :) gl in the contest. Regards // paul

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/29/2020 1:40:00 PM

Hi Paul, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2020 5:00:00 AM

You've got this!!! This is amazing. Love it. God bless you

Jan Allison

Date: 10/28/2020 5:30:00 PM

wtg you got the video on :-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/29/2020 5:14:00 AM

Once you get the hang of it it's easy, so happy I could help xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 10/28/2020 9:25:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much telling how to attach the video to the poem. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/28/2020 5:24:00 PM

Really amazing creatures of nature aren't they, nice line dear poetess

Emilia James

Date: 10/28/2020 4:10:00 PM

Pure sweet gold, Good luck in the contest Alexis, Emilia : )

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/28/2020 3:09:00 PM

Very good! Can't get much shorter than this! G.L. in the context, Alexis. :) Gershon

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2020 12:53:00 PM

short and sweet. ~~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/28/2020 12:36:00 PM

I just love the stuff, always a spoonful on my cereal. Good luck. Tom PS. Soupmail.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/28/2020 12:10:00 PM

- ... yellow ... and sweet :) - GL in the contest, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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